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Raider Of The Lost Fart
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Hey,
Check this out -> BBC SPORT | Football | Football's Frankenstein I'm 100% sure this guy will not be playing in the Premier League next season. But it's pretty interesting none the less. For fun, if you were using the same NLP training technique to become a master copywriter fast; who would you be studying for each of these critical copy elements? (I've put my choices below) Headline - Gene Schwartz Paragraph #1 - Not sure. Who opens a sales letter better than the rest? Slippery Slide - Not sure. Who's excellent at keeping copy flowing? Closing - Not sure. Who's the best closer? Structure - Not sure. Who has the best logical sequence? Conversational - Gary Halbert Proof - Gary Bencivenga Creativity - Bill Glazer Emotional - John Caples (Piano, I'm making real money now etc) What do you think? Also, anymore copy elements to add too? (I know I'm missing a lot) Cheers, Colm |
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Matthew James O'Connor
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Hey Colm,
I think for slippery slide you've got to say Carlton...perhaps best closer too? Hmmm.... |
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HyperActive Warrior
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I'd put Harlan Kilstein for all elements if the copy is NLP based.
There's just no question about it LOL
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Clayton Makepeaces has fans saying he's the master closer
in print. I dunno. He seems to mostly write for Health and Investment stuff - in those areas he brings to bear both emotional and factual proof - a potent combination. |
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I'd go with Kern for conversational and headline
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I think you have the whole thing backwards.
1). I don't know who Baleci's helper's are, but they/he can't be that good at NLP if he is talking of copying a player's four or five little steps before kicking a ball. 2). A master copywriter would write specifically for the reader, not from who does the best headline, or close etc. But I get your point. |
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NLP is very powerful. With the mastery of NLP you can do almost anything.
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