Conversational Copy Critiques by Orson Welles and Barry White

Pusateri · 02-02-2011, 04:14 PM

Reading your copy out loud is a time-tested way to improve it.

Here, Mr. Welles offers constructive criticism...and a special favor...

YouTube - Orson Welles - Frozen Peas

Mr. White has some choice words for the copywriter...

YouTube - Barry's Mad!

BrianMcLeod · 02-03-2011, 11:23 AM

"Cordially invites yo ass to come on down..."

Collette · 02-03-2011, 02:59 PM

SWIPE.

I call first dibs on this quote. It's my new go-to line for QuikCritique.

"This is very wearying one... it's unpleasant to read. Unrewarding. ...This is a lot of sh*t. You know that...?" ™

Runners up:

"What is it you want - in the depths of your ignorance - what is it you want? Because I can't deliver it!"

"Cordially invites yo ass to come on down."

*wipes tears from eyes*

A single "thanks" is insufficient for these two gems.

Harrisonamy · 02-08-2011, 07:35 AM

Love it! Am keeping this for reference. :-)

02-03-2011, 11:23 AM	#2
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02-03-2011, 02:59 PM	#3
Collette Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: alicubi super pluvia Posts: 787 Thanks: 242 Thanked 527 Times in 265 Posts	Re: Conversational Copy Critiques by Orson Welles and Barry White SWIPE. I call first dibs on this quote. It's my new go-to line for QuikCritique. "This is very wearying one... it's unpleasant to read. Unrewarding. ...This is a lot of sht. You know that...?" ™ Runners up: "What is it you want - in the depths of your ignorance - what is it you want? Because I can't deliver it!" "Cordially invites yo ass to come on down." wipes tears from eyes* A single "thanks" is insufficient for these two gems.

02-08-2011, 07:35 AM	#4
Harrisonamy Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Conversational Copy Critiques by Orson Welles and Barry White Love it! Am keeping this for reference. :-)