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Old 02-11-2011, 09:32 AM   #1
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From Andy Jenkins Kajabi blog - 7 Truly Awful Landing Pages You Won't Believe are From Well-known Brands - Kajabi

[BTW ever noticed that analysis has the word anal in it? Not that this is anal. Just saying]



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Old 02-11-2011, 10:06 AM   #2
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Mal - it's obvious whoever put that word in the dictionary was trying to embed some sort of command.

Ex. Now as you do analysis...see what I mean?

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Old 02-11-2011, 12:20 PM   #3
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Ross! Stop with the copyvoodoo. I haven't walked the same since I read that.
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What copy? lol I'm not a copywriter
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Old 02-11-2011, 12:28 PM   #5
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Definitely some great examples and I like how they compare the good/bad and support it with explanations. The bank one made me laugh

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Or am I...
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@Ross and Mal

Your remarks remind me of a recent article I read at the famous Dutch website NU.nl

Creatief met hashtags | nu.nl/column dinsdag | Het laatste nieuws het eerst op nu.nl

It's about Twitter hash-tags being misinterpreted.

Like:

#therapist - the rapist or therapist.
#leukevent - Dutch for either 'nice event' or 'nice guy'
#urineverlies - either Uri Never Lies or, well, let's just say 'verlies' means 'to lose'

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@Ross and Mal

Your remarks remind me of a recent article I read at the famous Dutch website NU.nl

Creatief met hashtags | nu.nl/column dinsdag | Het laatste nieuws het eerst op nu.nl

It's about Twitter hash-tags being misinterpreted.

Like:

#therapist - the rapist or therapist.
#leukevent - Dutch for either 'nice event' or 'nice guy'
#urineverlies - either Uri Never Lies or, well, let's just say 'verlies' means 'to lose'
Or even the celebrated Welcome to Pen Island! The best pens on the internet!



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Old 02-11-2011, 01:44 PM   #9
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Lol it's never a dull moment with any of you.

All this analysis talk reminds me of classic Arrested Development..


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That was amazing, need the sauce on that.
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