Which Headline is better for mass appeal?

MindReality · 12-04-2008, 05:36 AM

Hi,

Which headline do you think is better for mass appeal?

Headline one:

"Discover The Greatest Secrets Of The Mind And Reality That Will Get You Anything You Desire, Almost Like Magic!"

Headline two:

"Finally Discover All The Secrets of Life And The Universe Found On This Website To Get Everything You Ever Wanted!"

Any comments and suggestions are welcomed!

Ross Dalangin · 12-04-2008, 05:40 AM

"Discover The Greatest Secrets Of Life That Will Get You Anything You Desire, Almost Like Magic!"

So the nearest I like is the first one.

Ross

travlinguy · 12-04-2008, 06:27 AM

Both of thesew headlines are pretty unbelievable. "Get Anything You Ever Wanted?" Do you think people are going to take that seriously?

MindReality · 12-04-2008, 07:39 AM

How about this one:

Headline 3:

“Discover The Hidden Secret Knowledge and Real Science of Attracting All the Wealth, Success and Happiness You Ever Wanted Beyond Your Wildest Dreams!”

Would this work better than the first two?

colmodwyer · 12-04-2008, 08:09 AM

If you're aiming for "mass appeal," you'll be lucky to get any appeal at all.

Colm

MindReality · 12-04-2008, 08:53 AM

Please consider headline 3 as well which I posted above.

Any suggestions about what would be an appealing headline to sell a mind power/self-help/law of attraction information product?

Show me what would be an appealing headline with your talents. Thank you.

MindReality · 12-04-2008, 11:43 AM

How about...

"Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!"

Is this headline much better?

Topgunb · 12-05-2008, 09:54 AM

Hi

I would combine the two

Discover the secret to getting everything you ever wanted!

It is short, powerful, and caters to out I want it thinking.

Brian

Vin_J · 12-05-2008, 03:15 PM

add in some proof or a case study into the headline. It needs a hook and more believability

Andy LaPointe · 12-07-2008, 12:22 PM

As mentioned in any earlier post, it depends on your target market.

If I read the following heading

"Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!"

When I read that I would expect to achieve prosperity in all areas of my life... my job, my home, my car, my family, my weight, my breath, my relationships, etc. You want to tighten up your claims so they are focused like a laser pointing at the heart of your target market.

maximus242 · 12-07-2008, 05:15 PM

I think ALL of those headlines suck.

They're all unbelievable. The claims are wayyyy bigger than you can back up anyways. You have to have MASSIVE proof to back that up.

Go Look at Nightingale Conants copy for god sakes. You cant look at the online copy, you have to buy something and get on their list. Some of the best copywriters in the world write for them.

Here is one of their headlines

You know what you need to do...

... to be healthy ... to get organized ... to make more money
... to simplify your life ... or to have whatever it is you want.

So why don't you do it?

The answer ISN'T what you think!

*subhead* It's not laziness, low motication or lack of will power standing between you and succes.

Look inside for the suprising REAL REASON why you're not doing what you know you should ... and for a revolutionary approach to achievement that will put you in control of your life and enable you to reach ANY goal -- easily -- no matter what it is.

Now THAT is good sales copy.

MindReality · 12-09-2008, 02:20 PM

Which of these two headlines is better?

Headline 1:

Discover All The Secrets of The Universe To Get Everything You Ever Wanted

Headline 2:

Discover The Most Closely Guarded Secrets To Get Everything You Desire

Just let me know which one is better and why.

12-04-2008, 05:36 AM	#1
MindReality Super Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 148 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Which Headline is better for mass appeal? Hi, Which headline do you think is better for mass appeal? Headline one: "Discover The Greatest Secrets Of The Mind And Reality That Will Get You Anything You Desire, Almost Like Magic!" Headline two: "Finally Discover All The Secrets of Life And The Universe Found On This Website To Get Everything You Ever Wanted!" Any comments and suggestions are welcomed!
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12-04-2008, 07:39 AM	#4
MindReality Super Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 148 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? How about this one: Headline 3: “Discover The Hidden Secret Knowledge and Real Science of Attracting All the Wealth, Success and Happiness You Ever Wanted Beyond Your Wildest Dreams!” Would this work better than the first two?
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12-04-2008, 08:09 AM	#5
colmodwyer Raider Of The Lost Fart War Room Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Baltimore, MD Posts: 1,534 Thanks: 43 Thanked 140 Times in 79 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? If you're aiming for "mass appeal," you'll be lucky to get any appeal at all. Colm

12-04-2008, 08:53 AM	#6
MindReality Super Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 148 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? Please consider headline 3 as well which I posted above. Any suggestions about what would be an appealing headline to sell a mind power/self-help/law of attraction information product? Show me what would be an appealing headline with your talents. Thank you.
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12-04-2008, 11:43 AM	#7
MindReality Super Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 148 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? How about... "Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!" Is this headline much better?
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12-05-2008, 09:54 AM	#8
Topgunb HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 245 Thanks: 6 Thanked 27 Times in 24 Posts Social Networking	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? Hi I would combine the two Discover the secret to getting everything you ever wanted! It is short, powerful, and caters to out I want it thinking. Brian

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Vin_J Warrior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 28 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? add in some proof or a case study into the headline. It needs a hook and more believability

12-07-2008, 12:22 PM	#10
Andy LaPointe Lapte War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Cherry Capital of the World, Traverse City Michigan Posts: 178 Thanks: 11 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? As mentioned in any earlier post, it depends on your target market. If I read the following heading "Discover How To Create Huge Success and Prosperity In All Areas of Life With These Powerful Secrets!" When I read that I would expect to achieve prosperity in all areas of my life... my job, my home, my car, my family, my weight, my breath, my relationships, etc. You want to tighten up your claims so they are focused like a laser pointing at the heart of your target market.
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12-07-2008, 05:15 PM	#11
maximus242 HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: , , . Posts: 395 Thanks: 4 Thanked 118 Times in 81 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? I think ALL of those headlines suck. They're all unbelievable. The claims are wayyyy bigger than you can back up anyways. You have to have MASSIVE proof to back that up. Go Look at Nightingale Conants copy for god sakes. You cant look at the online copy, you have to buy something and get on their list. Some of the best copywriters in the world write for them. Here is one of their headlines You know what you need to do... ... to be healthy ... to get organized ... to make more money ... to simplify your life ... or to have whatever it is you want. So why don't you do it? The answer ISN'T what you think! subhead It's not laziness, low motication or lack of will power standing between you and succes. Look inside for the suprising REAL REASON why you're not doing what you know you should ... and for a revolutionary approach to achievement that will put you in control of your life and enable you to reach ANY goal -- easily -- no matter what it is. Now THAT is good sales copy.

12-09-2008, 02:20 PM	#12
MindReality Super Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 148 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Which Headline is better for mass appeal? Which of these two headlines is better? Headline 1: Discover All The Secrets of The Universe To Get Everything You Ever Wanted Headline 2: Discover The Most Closely Guarded Secrets To Get Everything You Desire Just let me know which one is better and why.
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