Can You Please Help Me?

[allenjohn]

Hi,

Have spent the last 6 months putting Wordpress Plugins | Fruity Plugins togther. It is really a great Wordpress plugin, set to become a brilliant plugin. Can I get that message across? Not likely. Would appreciate any and all advice. I'll give a free Upgrade key to everyone who replies. Thanks, Allen

PS Oops! Nearly forgot the link: Wordpress Plugins | Fruity Plugins

[DavidJohnson]

AllenJohn,

When I first clicked on the link I was a little confused at what I was looking at. The only reason I stuck it out was because I wanted to answer your question.

Looks like I found a sales page after I clicked features and again found myself scratching my head. I was wondering why I would want a "machine" on my blog. After further reading I got to the benefits and then it started to sound pretty neat and I can see how this plug-in could really be beneficial.

My recommendations is to give the benefit in the headline, the way it's written it sounds like you just want to give me a report and a few freebies along with it.

Now this is just off my head but what about a headline that says something like:

Hundreds of DoFollow Backlinks of all Page Ranks and an Increase in Site Stickiness, all with One Wordpress Plug-in

With more time I'm sure you could come up with something better but the headline is what grabs the attention of the reader, cause with out their attention they won't know what a great plug-in you have to offer.

Begin the body with talking about the pain we all go through trying to get quality backlinks. Really twist the knife then show us how your plug-in will make all that pain go away.

Hope this helps!

[allenjohn]

Brilliant! Thanks. truly appreciated. All the very best, Allen

[Colorado Deb]

A way down in your page, you have a section that starts with:

"Listen, here’s what Fruity Plugin can do…"

Then you go on to list some of the benefits. These will stand out more if you make them into a bulleted list.

So many on the web are skimmers and scanners, and just scroll on down and read headlines, subheads and bullet points. Plus, bullet points attract the eye and make whatever is in the list appear easier to read.

May your Fruity Plugin capture the low-hanging AND high-flying fruit!

[allenjohn]

Hi - Thanks your help is truly appreciated. Fruity has a new look, please let me know what you think. Thanks, Allen

[UnityinAustralia]

DUde, in your current version of the home page, you need to say what the fruity plugin does.

Unless you are selling to people who have already heard of it, and know what it is about, and just want to download it and get going.

When I arrived, I couldn't immediately figure out what it was all about. Looked for 5 seconds, then thought it was too confusing, and left.

[allenjohn]

Originally Posted by UnityinAustralia

DUde, in your current version of the home page, you need to say what the fruity plugin does.

Unless you are selling to people who have already heard of it, and know what it is about, and just want to download it and get going.

When I arrived, I couldn't immediately figure out what it was all about. Looked for 5 seconds, then thought it was too confusing, and left.

Yes, agree with you. We're releasing a new version tomorrow, so all will be a lot clearer then. In the meantime, if you checkout this page:

Fruity Plugins - Ultimate Wordpress Plugins

Then all should be clearer. Thanks, Allen