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Old 02-23-2011, 01:00 AM   #1
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Default My Last EVER Email to you!

hehe..hi all
Ok maybe my title might be a little OTT but I'd like your opinion please on an email I'm thinking of sending as the last in a sequence of 10 to subscribers to my Piano Course list.

My thoughts are that if they haven't bought by this email then they probably won't unless occasionally I send them through a special deal or something which they might take up. Here goes and many thanks in advance

The Title is:
Get A.S.A.Piano For FREE!

The Body reads

Hey 'Name', No this isn't a wind up. I'm serious!

Here's the deal. Buy A.S.A.Piano today and if you don't think that it's amazing then simply ask for a refund and I'll give you a courteous, full 100% money back refund with no questions asked.

You will get to keep the full course including the super bonus downloads and not only that you will still be entitled to a lifetime membership of the teaching forum.

No 'Name' I haven't suddenly lost my marbles so don't worry! Here's why:

I'm so confident that you will love the course, the super bonuses and the one on one support I provide that I'm willing to offer this amazing deal to you. No other teaching course has that amount of confidence in their system.

Simply click here to buy the course, give it a try and if you don't like it then email me samantha@asapiano.com and I'll give you your money back and you get to keep the full course!

Here's the link again:
Buy A.S.A.Piano Now >>

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards
Samantha

P.S. If you're wondering why I'm so confident you'll love the course then read these testimonials:

"Thank you for a wonderful method of teaching. I'm 61 years old and never thought I'd have chance to learn to play piano. Thanks to your course I can now play some easy songs all the way through."
Marion Plummer - Canada

"I am 62 years by age and a retired person. I am learning Keyboard for one year. Your lessons are a big help to me and show me how to play songs. Best regards from your student."
Alphonso - India

"I've only had the download for a few days but I can already play 'Let It Be'. I'm really pleased with the progress I've made in such a short space of time using your simple teaching system. Many thanks Samantha."
Kathy Watson - UK

"My friend told me about your piano song lessons so my mum has downloaded the full course and it's really good."
Molly - Aged 11

"You've clearly put a lot of effort and thought into the teaching material. I'm actually able to play something that sounds good for a change. Well done and many thanks for giving me the confidence to play in front of my family now."
M.Simpson

"Very nice tutorials, very thorough, accurate and your videos are really easy to follow, regardless of the tune. Well done Samantha, you've put a fantastic amount of effort into your tutorials."
Kit - NY

Here's the link again:
Buy A.S.A.Piano Now >>

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Old 02-23-2011, 01:06 AM   #2
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Default Re: My Last EVER Email to you!

If that is email number 10 in your course, then that gets sent to everyone who is on the list. What if someone on the list has already bought it and then receives this last email?

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Old 02-23-2011, 01:17 AM   #3
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If that is email number 10 in your course, then that gets sent to everyone who is on the list. What if someone on the list has already bought it and then receives this last email?
Hi I'm quite thorough with purchases so once someone has bought then I take them off the list and ask them to subscribe to a different one, but yeah occasionally someone could slip through the net and I understand this.

Maybe I have too much faith in my product and people but I genuinely believe that once someone tries it they will think that it is money well spent and only a minority would get their money back..but these people could actually do that anyway.

We have had very few refunds.

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Old 02-23-2011, 05:23 AM   #4
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To be fair - one would have to see the copy on the previous auto-responders before truly giving you a fair critique. Each auto-responder should cause your prospect to take one small step in the right direction - if that's not done, then the final email might be asking them to take one big leap..and not all maybe prone to that kind of faith.

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