Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase

The Niche Man · 03-11-2011, 08:27 AM

Help me brainstorm a killer "call to action" phrase. There are no bad ideas here, let it rip.

Ken_Caudill · 03-11-2011, 11:41 AM

Here's what you need to do right now.

AdwordsMogul · 03-11-2011, 12:43 PM

What are you selling?

It's hard to give you something relevant without the rest of the copy.

Oxbloom · 03-11-2011, 01:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ken_Caudill

Here's what you need to do right now.

In the absence of more info, stick with the classics.

Oxbloom · 03-11-2011, 01:23 PM

Also, "help me," suggests that you'll be tossing out some of your own ideas as well, I figure. So let's hear what you've got so far!

Ross James · 03-11-2011, 02:07 PM

Step 1. change something (big benefit) fast, painless
Step 2. by clicking here now
Step 3. ????
Step 4. profit

Mr. Subtle · 03-11-2011, 02:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Niche Man

Help me brainstorm a killer "call to action" phrase.

Here's a "killer" example...

*with apologies to the N@t Lampoon.

Ken_Caudill · 03-11-2011, 02:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oxbloom

In the absence of more info, stick with the classics.

Yup. All calls to action are a variation of that phrase. If it works, don't fix it.

Andrew Maclean · 03-11-2011, 02:48 PM

One _______ every _______ should know. Find out here.

PAPUSA · 03-11-2011, 02:56 PM

Don't Just Sit There - Do Something
Call Now
Push This Button =>

Don't Be A Prop - Be A Player
Call...

Baby, It's Cold Outside...
Come On In =>

If Wishes Were Money, We'd All Be Rich
Take Action Now...

Leap Before You Limp
Come On In =>

The Niche Man · 03-11-2011, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AdwordsMogul

What are you selling?

It's hard to give you something relevant without the rest of the copy.

I am planning to sell an ebook showing others how to motivate themselves.

tjapukai · 03-11-2011, 08:44 PM

Your World Is What You Make It - Have Every Want And Desire Completely Satisfied Or Sit On The Couch With Your (Loser) Friends Eating Doritos And Stinking Up The House - The Choice Is Yours

then maybe sub head something like

Your Wife Knows What She Wants You To Do

ewenmack · 03-11-2011, 11:33 PM

This outline comes from Clayton Makepeace...Chris Haddad
and his students use this in their sales videos...

"You are at the crossroads now, which one will you take...

#1 Do nothing, get nothing. [Mmmm...failure]

#2 Do it yourself and try to figure it out as you go
[Mmm...sounds like hard work]

#3 Golden Road: Hit the road running with X FACTOR
and cruise into the sunset." [Yeah obvious choice really]
----------------------------------------------------------

Remember, that's an abbreviated outline of the 3 choices any reader has...
no matter what you are selling.

It's there to adjust and strengthen for your situation.

And any decent advice should always make a strong case for testing.

So PLEASE do!

Best,
Ewen

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03-11-2011, 01:23 PM	#5
Oxbloom J.W. Acre War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 440 Thanks: 74 Thanked 244 Times in 139 Posts	Re: Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase Also, "help me," suggests that you'll be tossing out some of your own ideas as well, I figure. So let's hear what you've got so far!

03-11-2011, 02:07 PM	#6
Ross James Meta Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Boston Suburbs, USA Posts: 487 Thanks: 96 Thanked 80 Times in 71 Posts Contact Info	Re: Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase Step 1. change something (big benefit) fast, painless Step 2. by clicking here now Step 3. ???? Step 4. profit

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Andrew Maclean Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: United Kingdom Posts: 51 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase One _______ every _______ should know. Find out here.

03-11-2011, 02:56 PM	#10
PAPUSA Warrior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Don't Just Sit There - Do Something Call Now Push This Button => Don't Be A Prop - Be A Player Call... Baby, It's Cold Outside... Come On In => If Wishes Were Money, We'd All Be Rich Take Action Now... Leap Before You Limp Come On In =>

03-11-2011, 08:44 PM	#12
tjapukai Warrior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase Your World Is What You Make It - Have Every Want And Desire Completely Satisfied Or Sit On The Couch With Your (Loser) Friends Eating Doritos And Stinking Up The House - The Choice Is Yours then maybe sub head something like Your Wife Knows What She Wants You To Do

03-11-2011, 11:33 PM	#13
ewenmack Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Auckland, New Zealand Posts: 2,092 Thanks: 790 Thanked 1,027 Times in 558 Posts	Re: Help! Need Creative Killer Call To Action Phrase This outline comes from Clayton Makepeace...Chris Haddad and his students use this in their sales videos... "You are at the crossroads now, which one will you take... #1 Do nothing, get nothing. [Mmmm...failure] #2 Do it yourself and try to figure it out as you go [Mmm...sounds like hard work] #3 Golden Road: Hit the road running with X FACTOR and cruise into the sunset." [Yeah obvious choice really] ---------------------------------------------------------- Remember, that's an abbreviated outline of the 3 choices any reader has... no matter what you are selling. It's there to adjust and strengthen for your situation. And any decent advice should always make a strong case for testing. So PLEASE do! Best, Ewen