Critique my landing page please

[priyankeshu]

I am planning to offer services related to pyramid link building. For that i have created a simple page

I tried sending some traffic onto it. But till now no conversions.

Click here to see it

[joebel]

About the design It's just a normal page. Try to improve the design add some content that is catchy to the eyes. Your content needs to shorten a little bit I thinks it's too long. Try some online softwares to improve your landing page regarding to the designs. I hope this might help.

[xtremeux]

I suggest you put 3 - 4 powerful testimonials with good explanation. If you put some pictures of clients with testimonials it will work better.

Also, recommend to put a video with your small presentation.