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Old 04-08-2011, 04:53 PM   #1
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For those who aspire to becoming copywriters and want to create an attention grabbing headline, here's a 1 Click Free Headline Analyzer solution you will love! Great for Twitter too! Have Fun!

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Old 04-08-2011, 05:03 PM   #2
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That's a completely useless tool. I hope no one actually takes you seriously, because it's going to hurt their earnings.

Maybe fun for five minutes as a novelty. Certainly not something anyone remotely serious about business would contemplate taking seriously.

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Old 04-08-2011, 05:49 PM   #3
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Heh. That thing pops up regularly around here. It's a shame people don't think like machines. If they did, the good old headline analyzer would put us all out of work.

Maybe someone should invent a one-click keyword seeder and put all the dollar article writers on the street.

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Old 04-08-2011, 06:49 PM   #4
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Just for the heck of it, I tried the headline

"How To Make Insane Profits Online With NO WEBSITE NEEDED Using eBay Craigslist And Walmart"

(headline I'm using for an upcoming product release I'm planning)... It gave me a 33.33% rating which according to the site is right where professional copy writers land (woo-hoo)...but if instead of "Walmart" I say "Wal-Mart" the rating drops to 26.67%

The tool itself is too simplistic (in my humble opinion) but the message is as clear as it is valid....your headlines need to appeal to your prospect on an EMOTIONAL level.
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Just for the heck of it, I tried the headline

"How To Make Insane Profits Online With NO WEBSITE NEEDED Using eBay Craigslist And Walmart"

(headline I'm using for an upcoming product release I'm planning)... It gave me a 33.33% rating which according to the site is right where professional copy writers land (woo-hoo)...but if instead of "Walmart" I say "Wal-Mart" the rating drops to 26.67%

The tool itself is too simplistic (in my humble opinion) but the message is as clear as it is valid....your headlines need to appeal to your prospect on an EMOTIONAL level.
Reach out to them and you'll get a higher score...Try

How You Too Can Profit Online Using eBay Craigslist And Walmart

The grab is in "How You Too Can Profit Online"... the rest you're just blabbing...

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Old 04-08-2011, 07:15 PM   #6
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That's a completely useless tool. I hope no one actually takes you seriously, because it's going to hurt their earnings.

Maybe fun for five minutes as a novelty. Certainly not something anyone remotely serious about business would contemplate taking seriously.

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You need to get close to your reader to get a higher score. Ok, no tool is perfect... don't use it if you don't like it... "hurt their earnings"? Really now...what were your earnings last month Mr Know it all? ...nuff said

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That tool is actually useful. It shows people that it takes real people to write compelling copy, not software. I gotta go. I'm spinning a 200-word article into 50 uniques...

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This thing actually SEEMED to work until I gave it the ultimate test with the ultimate book title: "Think and grow rich" guess what? EMV score: 0.00% and here's the advice given: Neutral Headline: Your headline either has no words that invoke emotional impact with people person, or the percentage of such words is so low as to be unlikely to make any emotional impact

Headlines with little or no emotional words rarely do as well as headlines with stronger emotional content. You can attempt to shorten your headlines, or use different words and analyze the new headline.


What?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Still, it's a little helpful, did help me get some ideas going, guess you can't win 'em all.
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Old 04-10-2011, 07:37 PM   #9
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Start plugging in the classics and see how lowly they score.

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This thing actually SEEMED to work until I gave it the ultimate test with the ultimate book title: "Think and grow rich" guess what? EMV score: 0.00% .
Based on what Bernard said earlier, I figured the tool can't pick up the understood "you".

Change: "Think and grow rich."

To: "You think and you grow rich."

and the score is 33.33%.

Change it to: ""You think and you grow rich you silly bastard."

And you get a copywriting genius rating of 44.44%

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Change it to: ""You think and you grow rich you silly bastard."
I am writing that book already - don't steal my title
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Well,


I just scored 100 %

The headline ?

"Unique Marketing Reveals Winner"
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Old 04-11-2011, 02:56 AM   #13
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Based on what Bernard said earlier, I figured the tool can't pick up the understood "you".

Change: "Think and grow rich."

To: "You think and you grow rich."

and the score is 33.33%.

Change it to: ""You think and you grow rich you silly bastard."

And you get a copywriting genius rating of 44.44%
LOL... Ok ... "Start to Think and grow rich today you lazy good for nothing wannabe".... 53.85% not bad...

It was actually way past my bedtime (more like my wake time without sleep period) when I tested just the book title. After a little sleep it struck me that not all book titles are actually complete headlines, then I saw your post and...

I guess it does have its uses. Not an altogether total waste of time after all said and done.

It can definitely get your juices flowing if your brain cells can develop good headline ideas on their own to start with, so my "EMV score" for the software is about 50/50... at the end of the day, not that bad a tool.

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