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Old 04-09-2011, 02:00 PM   #1
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Default Very Well Written 48 Page Sales Letter

Michael Masterson's ETR had a link in today's email that pointed to a video.

After starting the video and trying to exit, it gave me the usual "Wait Before You Go... Click on the *CANCEL* button to stay on the page..." message.

Hitting "CANCEL" gave me the 48 page sales letter - transcription of the video! It's 15,381 words of well written, "financial scare tactics" letter, and worth keeping for your swipe file.

I selected all and copy/pasted it into a blank Word document.

Mods - I am not affiliated with these folks in any way, and I am certainly not recommending the company in the sales letter in any way. It's just a well written scare letter. BTW I Googled the company name and received an eye-full.

Here is the link, and remember, as soon as you start watching the video, try to close out of the page to get the "CANCEL" button that will take you to the letter.

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Default Re: Very Well Written 48 Page Sales Letter

Excellent sales letter! However it didn't scare me...that is it didn't scare me MORE than I'm already scared...well scared is a strong word...let's say 'highly concerned and disgusted'...

If you have a family making 50K a year and they are spending 75K a year and are already $250,000 in debt it doesn't take an accountant or economist to realize they are in DEEP financial trouble. It's the same for governments, and the piper will have to be paid soon.

This letter doesn't propogate fear, it just removes the blinders to let the REAL fear in...that's the mark of a truly great sales letter... building on real fears, not imagined ones.
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