HELP lol

[humbledmarket]

Hey so sorry to trouble you guys but I am launching a product soon that I really put a lot of effort into. I have almost finished my ebook and so working on the sales page.

This is my second product in about 4 years?

Anyways I think I have too much emotional attachment to my product which i ended up making the sales page...just a tat too long.

The sales is intended to be on the WF as a WSO then slowly to a sales page for clickbank.

However I am guessing WF members aren't interested in reading 3000 words?

Can some of you help me critique my Sales page. If you got the time I would greatly appreciate it your help.

Even better still if you're interested in helping me rewrite and edit the sales page I would be willing for a JV of 25% all Sales. Alternatively if you're in the business of Copyright just shoot me a Pm with a quote for rewriting and I might require your services.

The sales page has a lot of good points in it. Passive Income, Stable Income, Cheap, Simple, Fast also stressed a lot on the essence of how it's unique. It's a common known method with a twist to it that makes it a LOT more easier.

I also added a 400% money back guarantee because I am so confident with it as well a blue print for people to follow so they can be successful...problem is...sales page too long...my guess people might just close it.

Well anyways it's 1:32 am here so instead of ranting on I'll off to youtube and listen to some music. Thanks so much in advance for any feedback.

Please Pm me or email me at n(.)z(.) benjamin09 (a.t.) gmail.com

THANKS Again!

God Bless,
Benjamin