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| ![]() Thought this was a PERFECT HEADLINE for an Air Conditioning company. It definitely grabbed my attention when I first drove past the billboard. I would imagine it would have the same effect as the headline to a sales letter. ![]() This sign has been in South Florida for a few years now, but I figured I would share it with some of you that hadn't seen it yet. |
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It was good enough to make me click and read. That was a great ad choice and would make me call if I needed an A/C serviced .
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Headline is killer... just added your jpg to my swipes.
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If that is placed by the highway in the middle of the desert, and the potential customer driving by has his AC out of whack... yeah, it would most likely pull some sales. Nice find! |
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lol.... old news.... theyre a local AC co here in miami.... its been in the news for the last couple of years... so much so another AC co tired ripping them w a similar ad.
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Good one indeed! Creativity wins.
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Yeah I know... She's a total piece of ass. So thanks! |
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I, for one, have no problem sending these people to your house to be alone with your hot wife. Oh please use the "...boom chicka wow wow" background music in the radio spots. Please. Please. Please. Because nothing causes people to invite a stranger into their home better than boom-chicka wow wow. Anyone who has watched a porn movie knows that. TV spots could have a Jersey Shore guy, coverall unzipped to navel, fifteen gold chains around his neck. A wife would never shoot you for calling these guys over to "...fix that for ya." (IfyaknowutImean.) Slogan: We take the concept of contractors screwing you to a whole 'nother level. Wait, is this a continuation of the "Copywriting is Like Love Making" thread. 'cause that's hi-larious. |
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Life insurance salesman: So what will your wife do if you die suddenly? Prospect: She can remarry. Life insurance salesman: Have you taken a good look at that bitch lately? Ba da bing. |
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Killer Headline. I think they hired any copywriter. It's unique, not as 1000 other billboards.
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another one... |
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The first billboard message was a little cute and sometimes "cute" and "smart" doesn't sell because the message gets buried in the 'cuteness'. But the second billboard goes overboard in this respect so the the message gets even more cluttered. -Ray Edwards | |
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that other one is a rip from the one here in south fla. it got a LOT of publicity... especially down here.... so much so another AC company swiped the thing and did a similar ad.... and got sued. but this is like 2-3 years old guys... its defo not new. the billboard is on the interstate, so it gets a TON of views.... and down here, its hotter than hell... so you bet ppl need their AC. |
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Very creative indeed. The headline is catchy, short and makes one to look at the sign again and again.
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I like the first poster simple but more effective the second bill board really kills the whole thing by putting the girl there .... |
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Blonde, pretty, shapely... you can bet that model gets the second billboard plenty of attention. Is it more effective than the first? Who knows. My guess... yes. Interestingly, the two billboards are selling different benefits. The first billboard is selling emergency service: "Air Around The Clock" The second billboard is selling money savings: "Save $3,000 or more". Alex |
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How did the original ad do? Our opinion is meaningless if sales were not made (forgotten on Warrior, I know). In my opinion if my air went out my wife is not really any more concern than my own discomfort. I would not need to be driving down the street to get the idea to get it fixed- I would have cracked open the yellowist book and got a fixer over, fast. I prefer results over affection and the results are absent |
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Good point. Obviously, I don't have their sales figures to show.. However - I do know that most people in Miami are familiar with the sign and that company because of the "YOUR WIFE IS HOT" line.As someone posted above - it also allowed them to receive major media attention on tv. That's free advertising in itself! ![]() Quote:
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lolololol. Funny stuff.. what a great billboard.
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It's really an attention grabber. For people who just read the sign, they might probably have different concept of what the sign says, lol. Creativity really helps in promoting their sales. |
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Innovation, and really creativity is all that's needed to help launch a business. Now who wants to be my creative partner and help a numbers person ?
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The second is gratuitous, clumsy and crass. I think this thread might make a great teaching tool for good design vs bad. That said, I'd love to know the results of them both. I could be completely wrong... | |
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This may be old news, but it's new news to me! Thank you for sharing. It spared up a few ideas ---> puts thinking cap on.
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lol definitely caught my attention.
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From one copywriter to another - very clever sir. |
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Around Atlanta there's a tendency to randomly place cute dogs on billboards, and no, they aren't the company mascot. My best guess is that dogs come in 2nd in the category of "made you look" without all the weird baggage in the wife-is-hot approach. So what do you think of Your Dog is Hot (picture of collapsed dog with tongue hanging out - really easy picture to get with a bulldog, which btw is the University of Georgia mascot) - better get your A/C fixed! I bet the Florida HVAC competitor that went that route could trump those other guys and even get some press from the new angle. |
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Great billboard, but does anybody remember the name of the AC company or its phone number?
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Haha, made me click to see what's inside |
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Grabbed my attention anyway.. Swiped. |
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Hot attention headline....ad copy. However, the question is, would you like someone telling you that your wife is hot, after all you already knew she is hot and thats one reason you married her |
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I think it is a great headline and you could use many different twist to make it work for your needs
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Great billboard .. and I agree with Kieran. If the copy is too stunning, it can overpower the brand name which often gets overlooked.
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good way of advertising and marketing........
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hahaha very nice niche,new impression for the other people..everyone think that our wife is hot.but actualy is not.they sell air conditioner services,,hahahaha nice try
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Not all wives are hot. Actually, just some wives are hot. The message 'Your wife is hot' can easily make too many men cry or shoot at the sign. |
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hahahaha, this is to funny. I know that it got my attention lol |
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