Can someone critique my sales letter?

Joey89 · 06-21-2011, 02:35 PM

Right now I am working on a sales letter for my e-book, I am doing it from scratch using a free software called Kompozer. I am doing this because I am low on money, so templates or site builders is out of the question, for this moment...

I was wondering if I can make a post with the html as a attachment so people can view it and give me some honest/helpful feed back.

So if you are interested, I might edit this and attach the file here.

I have to say, it is a work in progress and could use a lot of help. If anyone can offer something, I would appreciate it.

Edit: I am finding out I can't upload an html file as an attachment, what could I do?

Thanks for reading!

Derek S · 06-21-2011, 02:46 PM

publish it online and give us the link to it.

First off, make sure you look at your top competitors sales copy and see if it can hold up against that. Writing copy is a trade skill that copy writers have down to an art-form. If you don't feel that way towards your sales letter, I can nearly guarantee it will convert at below 1%

06-21-2011, 02:35 PM	#1
Joey89 Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 78 Thanks: 11 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Can someone critique my sales letter? Right now I am working on a sales letter for my e-book, I am doing it from scratch using a free software called Kompozer. I am doing this because I am low on money, so templates or site builders is out of the question, for this moment... I was wondering if I can make a post with the html as a attachment so people can view it and give me some honest/helpful feed back. So if you are interested, I might edit this and attach the file here. I have to say, it is a work in progress and could use a lot of help. If anyone can offer something, I would appreciate it. Edit: I am finding out I can't upload an html file as an attachment, what could I do? Thanks for reading!

06-21-2011, 02:46 PM	#2
Derek S Advanced Warrior Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Waterloo, Ontario, Canada. Posts: 781 Thanks: 6 Thanked 113 Times in 54 Posts	Re: Can someone critique my sales letter? publish it online and give us the link to it. First off, make sure you look at your top competitors sales copy and see if it can hold up against that. Writing copy is a trade skill that copy writers have down to an art-form. If you don't feel that way towards your sales letter, I can nearly guarantee it will convert at below 1%
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