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Old 06-29-2011, 01:22 PM   #1
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I don't believe that these super-sized sales pages work at all. A video would help, but if people can't get to the point quicker that this, something is wrong. When I encounter one, I usually scan and skip to the bottom where the summary is. Wasted work! My two cents.

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Old 06-29-2011, 01:28 PM   #2
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"Believe" is probably one of the most dangerous words in marketing.

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Old 06-29-2011, 01:31 PM   #3
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Tell it to Agora, Weiss Research, Phillips, Boardroom, etc. They're making millions from them... so if you've got something better, I'm sure they'd love to see it!

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Scott, can you list an example?

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Old 06-29-2011, 02:06 PM   #5
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Model2Web makes a good point -- do you have an example of the pages you're talking about?

I obviously presumed you were referring to the long-copy (as in 20+ pages) sales pages commonly used in a variety of niches. But even so, I should have added this: So long as the copy is well written, long copy will often out-pull short copy.

"Yes, people read long copy. Readership falls off rapidly up to fifty words, but drops very little between fifty and five hundred words." -- David Ogilvy

Case in point: This 6,540-word ad by Louis Engel pulled in 10,000 responses when it ran in the New York Times.

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I don't believe that these super-sized sales pages work at all. A video would help, but if people can't get to the point quicker that this, something is wrong. When I encounter one, I usually scan and skip to the bottom where the summary is. Wasted work! My two cents.

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I don't believe that these super-sized sales pages work at all.
Word of caution: it's very easy to confuse 'this doesn't work for me' with 'this doesn't work for anyone'.

I'm willing to bet that if you split-test long copy and short copy for the same product, the long copy's going to do better over a large sample of people, but if you've got the numbers to prove me wrong then I'd love to see them.

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