Gary Halbert Copy Example | "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..."

Drez · 07-01-2011, 07:50 AM

Here's one my favorite's from my Gary Halbert swipe file ...

This was a full page ad in a Florida newspaper calling for "Every Attractive Women In Miami Who Is Serious About Having A Career As A Professional Model"

Okay, so who can resist reading this to find out more? (Not me ... and I'm not a women ... nor model material)

Have you even been to South Beach? It's seems to be a magnet for attractive women (at least the last time I was there). And how many do you think have ever dreamed - even for a fleeting moment - about becoming a model?

Then - just to keep you off balance - once you start reading Gary starts telling all the reasons why you WON'T make it as a model.

Honestly I'm not really sure what the TRUE business model was here (though Gary does give one in the copy).

You've gotta read this copy, it's just great.

Here's the - in the open - link to this classic Gary Halbert copywriting example to add to you personal swipe file.

Enjoy!

Gary Halbert | An Open Letter To Every Attractive Women in Miami | Copy Swipe File Example

MRMagMark · 07-01-2011, 08:03 AM

Great swipe. Thanks! But just an FYI: my download doc name said "sugarman_seminar_brochure.pdf" So I'm not sure if this is a Halbert or a Sugarman. Either way, it's great copy!

davemiz · 07-01-2011, 08:07 AM

lol... the ad is funny... but man... its waaaaay too long... probably fitting cuz it was used in a paper...

i used to live in south beach, now i'm about 20 min north of it. The women are stunning.

Len Bailey · 07-01-2011, 09:29 AM

You like that one, you'll love this...

For your swipe file: Gary Halbert's infamous personal ad...

Enjoy!

davemiz · 07-01-2011, 04:39 PM

classic.... a bit of overkill IMO, but it's classic.

Drez · 07-05-2011, 04:07 PM

It may have been over the top, but it did get him a girlfriend!

davemiz · 07-05-2011, 06:47 PM

i can get many girlfriends with less copy. :-)

07-01-2011, 07:50 AM	#1
Drez HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 195 Thanks: 24 Thanked 149 Times in 70 Posts Social Networking	Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File Here's one my favorite's from my Gary Halbert swipe file ... This was a full page ad in a Florida newspaper calling for "Every Attractive Women In Miami Who Is Serious About Having A Career As A Professional Model" Okay, so who can resist reading this to find out more? (Not me ... and I'm not a women ... nor model material) Have you even been to South Beach? It's seems to be a magnet for attractive women (at least the last time I was there). And how many do you think have ever dreamed - even for a fleeting moment - about becoming a model? Then - just to keep you off balance - once you start reading Gary starts telling all the reasons why you WON'T make it as a model. Honestly I'm not really sure what the TRUE business model was here (though Gary does give one in the copy). You've gotta read this copy, it's just great. Here's the - in the open - link to this classic Gary Halbert copywriting example to add to you personal swipe file. Enjoy! Gary Halbert \| An Open Letter To Every Attractive Women in Miami \| Copy Swipe File Example
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07-01-2011, 08:03 AM	#2
MRMagMark Active Warrior Join Date: May 2011 Location: Midwest, USA Posts: 43 Thanks: 31 Thanked 8 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File Great swipe. Thanks! But just an FYI: my download doc name said "sugarman_seminar_brochure.pdf" So I'm not sure if this is a Halbert or a Sugarman. Either way, it's great copy!

07-01-2011, 08:07 AM	#3
davemiz Senior Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Miami Posts: 1,574 Thanks: 14 Thanked 210 Times in 137 Posts	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File lol... the ad is funny... but man... its waaaaay too long... probably fitting cuz it was used in a paper... i used to live in south beach, now i'm about 20 min north of it. The women are stunning.
	Dave Miz “Judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.” ― Dalai Lama XIV

07-01-2011, 09:29 AM	#4
Len Bailey Copywriter, Consultant War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: North Carolina, USA Posts: 109 Blog Entries: 13 Thanks: 42 Thanked 71 Times in 37 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File You like that one, you'll love this... For your swipe file: Gary Halbert's infamous personal ad... Enjoy!
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07-01-2011, 04:39 PM	#5
davemiz Senior Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Miami Posts: 1,574 Thanks: 14 Thanked 210 Times in 137 Posts	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File classic.... a bit of overkill IMO, but it's classic.
	Dave Miz “Judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.” ― Dalai Lama XIV

07-05-2011, 04:07 PM	#6
Drez HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Long Island, NY Posts: 195 Thanks: 24 Thanked 149 Times in 70 Posts Social Networking	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File It may have been over the top, but it did get him a girlfriend!
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07-05-2011, 06:47 PM	#7
davemiz Senior Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Miami Posts: 1,574 Thanks: 14 Thanked 210 Times in 137 Posts	Re: Gary Halbert Copy Example \| "Open Letter To Attractive Women ..." \| Free Swipe File i can get many girlfriends with less copy. :-)
	Dave Miz “Judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it.” ― Dalai Lama XIV