% of Sales to Proofread & Assist in Reworking A Completed Sales Letter

adiknight · 07-05-2011, 04:09 AM

Hi all,

In my quest to become a better marketer, I ignored the temptation to outsource my sales page copy creation and gave it a go myself.

My top mentor, David Bryant, always insists that "a good marketer can be a terrible copy writer, but a good copy writer is ALWAYS a great marketer" - and I beleive this is true.

So, I have put together my first sales letter and I dont think I've done to badly, but it's still an amateur letter - at best!

The Offer

I'm more than happy to agree and share a % of sales to anyone who will take the time to proofread and help me rework this sales letter to bring it up to a better standard. I really want to "nail this on the head" when it comes to conversions.

I don't beleive that a lot of work is required, but please PM me and Ill send you a copy so you can decide for yourself.

Eitherway, completing this letter is my no.1 priority and I'm dedicated to getting going and completing this quickly, but not at the expense of its quality, of course.

The Details

This offer is targeting offline business owners with a mindmap on how to setup and structure their online business and online marketing.

The product itself is actually a WSO I purchased from Maria Gudelis and slightly reworked to add a bit more value:

2.0 Version: How the HECK did Maria Gudelis get $50,000 her 1ST WEEK in Offline Consulting?

I am a business transfer agent that specialises in selling technology and internet based companies. I'm selling this mindmap to help business owners structure their online business and marketing for maximum sale value, while at the same time opening up my business into offering a portfolio of online services to offline customers.

Do get in contact if interested (PM best)

I'll be testing the initial conversions of this letter via cold PPC traffic, I then have a growing volume of warm traffic ready to send to this offer.

Thanks in advance and keep up the great posts - I personally think that the copy writing forum is one of the higest value forums on WF!!

RRMarketing · 07-17-2011, 06:23 AM

Hello Adi Knight,

Please contact me by email at razvan.rogoz@gmail.com.

I'll send you a questionnaire and we can take it from there.

Thanks,
Razvan

07-05-2011, 04:09 AM	#1
adiknight Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 48 Thanks: 20 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	% of Sales to Proofread & Assist in Reworking A Completed Sales Letter Hi all, In my quest to become a better marketer, I ignored the temptation to outsource my sales page copy creation and gave it a go myself. My top mentor, David Bryant, always insists that "a good marketer can be a terrible copy writer, but a good copy writer is ALWAYS a great marketer" - and I beleive this is true. So, I have put together my first sales letter and I dont think I've done to badly, but it's still an amateur letter - at best! The Offer I'm more than happy to agree and share a % of sales to anyone who will take the time to proofread and help me rework this sales letter to bring it up to a better standard. I really want to "nail this on the head" when it comes to conversions. I don't beleive that a lot of work is required, but please PM me and Ill send you a copy so you can decide for yourself. Eitherway, completing this letter is my no.1 priority and I'm dedicated to getting going and completing this quickly, but not at the expense of its quality, of course. The Details This offer is targeting offline business owners with a mindmap on how to setup and structure their online business and online marketing. The product itself is actually a WSO I purchased from Maria Gudelis and slightly reworked to add a bit more value: 2.0 Version: How the HECK did Maria Gudelis get $50,000 her 1ST WEEK in Offline Consulting? I am a business transfer agent that specialises in selling technology and internet based companies. I'm selling this mindmap to help business owners structure their online business and marketing for maximum sale value, while at the same time opening up my business into offering a portfolio of online services to offline customers. Do get in contact if interested (PM best) I'll be testing the initial conversions of this letter via cold PPC traffic, I then have a growing volume of warm traffic ready to send to this offer. Thanks in advance and keep up the great posts - I personally think that the copy writing forum is one of the higest value forums on WF!!

07-17-2011, 06:23 AM	#2
RRMarketing Conversion Scientist Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 35 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Contact Info	Re: % of Sales to Proofread & Assist in Reworking A Completed Sales Letter Hello Adi Knight, Please contact me by email at razvan.rogoz@gmail.com. I'll send you a questionnaire and we can take it from there. Thanks, Razvan
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