What do you think about my ads?

[gregszul]

In the next few days I Will run a campaign for my salespage
You can find it here : lovedbyladies.com
The product is not available yet I'm looking for some opinions and criticism about my website and ads.

You can find my ads here: tinypic.com/r/351wkte/7

Thank You For Your Opinion

[adamlantelme]

First thing first.

Comes of as way to "pornish"

Why show scantily clad women? Why not show people in healthy relationships enjoying one another's company as opposed to playing to the base level eroticism that people are so used to seeing?

Once I clicked inside there was nothing that really made me want to stay.

Poor layout, poor grammar

Also you use the same pictures all the way through.

Essentially you need to make this professional and do a major overhaul on the sales copy

[RickDuris]

I understand what you are trying to do.

Strategically speaking, they won't click. And if a few click? They won't convert.

It's "same old, same old".

Today, you need a hook. A strong one.

I haven't seen the offer, so I can't supply.

But what makes your offer different? Unique? Special? Targeted to a very specific market.

- Rick Duris

[gregszul]

Thank You for your replies, I'm a beginner in the Internet Marketing and I know that I have to work hard to get some results.
I will redesign my website and ads in a next few days.

[adamlantelme]

Originally Posted by gregszul

Thank You for your replies, I'm a beginner in the Internet Marketing and I know that I have to work hard to get some results.
I will redesign my website and ads in a next few days.

You'll find if you can offer something that is unique you will get more bites.

The Internet is overwhelmed with these types of ads and sales pages. Therefore you're really going to need to separate yourself from the pack so to speak

So, when you're putting together and ad or a landing page, make sure to arouse their curiosity by saying something that isn't so predictable.

"Want to get laid" is nothing new. All I need to do is go to a bit torrent site and I'll be pummeled with ads telling me I can get laid with the click of a button.

If you were to say something different and unique then you'll rouse your prospects interest.

Perhaps go with an idea that is just a bit different. Something that still puts forth the main objective( getting laid) but is phrased differently.

Maybe..."Find out why you're going to want to invest in a brand new mattress after you read this program." or something along those lines.

Keep at it.