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Old 07-23-2011, 02:17 PM   #1
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Default "I Wrote the Same but Different Words." - The Power of Words

"It's a beautiful day but I can't see it."

The Power of Words

http://www.youtube.com/v/Hzgzim5m7oU...hl=en_US&rel=0

I thought I'd share it here in the hope you too might appreciate the moral of the story.

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Old 07-23-2011, 02:28 PM   #2
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Default Re: "I Wrote the Same but Different Words." - The Power of Words

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"It's a beautiful day but I can't see it."

Arfa Saira just sent this short video to me by email...

The Power of Words

http://www.youtube.com/v/Hzgzim5m7oU...hl=en_US&rel=0

I thought I'd share it here in the hope you too might appreciate the moral of the story.

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My first reaction when I got to the end of this video was 'awwww' (in a sad way) and I really felt like crying. That's the effect those words had on me...and no doubt on the onlookers and passersby.

Beautiful video and summarizes very succinctly what copywriting is all about - crafting your words carefully to evoke emotion and stir something within which makes you want to reach into your pockets....

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Old 07-23-2011, 03:07 PM   #3
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I just love that video.

Never get tired of watching it.

It's copywriting at it's best.

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Old 07-23-2011, 08:52 PM   #4
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Default Re: "I Wrote the Same but Different Words." - The Power of Words

God, I've seen this video dozens of times on various sites I visit.

... and it STILL gets me every time.

I need my tissues now.


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Old 07-23-2011, 09:08 PM   #5
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Wow, I've seen this over a dozen times..

Still gets to me.
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Old 07-24-2011, 09:01 PM   #6
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wow. thanks for sharing that.
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That's really beautiful - and a great message. Well done!
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Copyrighting is like modern-day poetry and prose combined, intended to pluck at the heartstrings and inform buyers of solutions to their problems at the same time. Thanks for sharing this, a good source of inspiration just when we need it

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Old 07-27-2011, 07:09 AM   #9
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Copyrighting is like...
Glad you enjoyed it Colleen. My pleasure.

Btw as I pointed out in your other post, it's copywriting not copyrighting.

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Old 07-27-2011, 09:18 AM   #10
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Default Re: "I Wrote the Same but Different Words." - The Power of Words

A touching video, I must admit.

I am the author of Heptagrama, and these are some sites I want to promote.
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Old 07-27-2011, 12:21 PM   #11
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Thank you. This is new to me. and powerful.
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Old 07-27-2011, 03:05 PM   #12
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Wow- I've never seen this video before.

Amazing.

Simple.

Gets the message across.

Thanks for the share!

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