Hey warriors, I need your "squeeze page" expertise...come look

[JosefBenjaminR]

Sup warriors,

My name is Josef Benjamin and I am promoting my new mini-course titled just as the website is shown.

I just came down to my 2nd computer and saw some of the formatting looked a little off, so I realize I will have to do the following:

Increase font size of headline
2. resize youtube video to make page a nice tight, squeeze
3. decrease font size of teaser headline and follow-headline.

I would like your expert opinions on this squeeze page, what you like, what you don't like, and what you would change or do better.

Don't criticize the page and NOT give your personal solution.

Also, don't tell me you aren't "fimiliar" with the term "viral url", and feel the need to post that here...don't waste my time or yours. Just don't post.

You don't need to know what it is really (a very profitable niche for me), I just want your opinion on what you feel are the best elements of a squeeze page.

Thx people!

IN SIG FILE BELOW THIS POST

[kctang]

1. I dont see any file mentioned in your sig.
2. you want us to look at your page, criticize it, but not give any of our "personal solution"? If we give our likes and dislikes, it'll be a personal suggestion, non?

2 post count... telling us to look at your squeeze page... are you looking to sell something? if you are, yall should checkout the WSO subforum (warrior special offers)

[JosefBenjaminR]

Originally Posted by kctang

1. I dont see any file mentioned in your sig.
2. you want us to look at your page, criticize it, but not give any of our "personal solution"? If we give our likes and dislikes, it'll be a personal suggestion, non?

2 post count... telling us to look at your squeeze page... are you looking to sell something? if you are, yall should checkout the WSO subforum (warrior special offers)

No no no, believe you me, I'm not trying to sell ANYHTHING here. I don't need too, I'm not a spammer, and I thought my page was in the sig, even after I put it there...and it's not...so that kinda sucks.

thx for trying though...

[Collette]

For someone with a 2 post count, who has contributed absolutely ZIP to this forum except to ask for a free handout of other people's time and expertise -

you sure do have a lot of terms and conditions.

Not to mention an extraordinarily abrasive manner.

Suggestion: Before you post your demands, actually LOOK and READ through this forum. NOTE how the people who add value here actually CONTRIBUTE.

Go thou, and do likewise.

Add something before you try to take. Give before you demand to receive.

That's really the best advice I can give you today.

[JosefBenjaminR]

Originally Posted by Collette

For someone with a 2 post count, who has contributed absolutely ZIP to this forum except to ask for a free handout of other people's time and expertise -

you sure do have a lot of terms and conditions.

Not to mention an extraordinarily abrasive manner.

Suggestion: Before you post your demands, actually LOOK and READ through this forum. NOTE how the people who add value here actually CONTRIBUTE.

Go thou, and do likewise.

Add something before you try to take. Give before you demand to receive.

That's really the best advice I can give you today.

hmmm, ok.

I do appreciate the feedback and understand where
you are coming from Collette.

I've had an account here before, contributed much,
but my original name was deleted due to situations
out of my control. It was my fault, but I never did
find out what it was I did that got my account banned.

Prior to that, I contributed greatly.

Maybe you were right, my original post was a little
agressive. If it offended you or anyone else reading
it here, i apologize.