Critique My "Hypnotic" Sales Letter

[Mark Andrews]

Originally Posted by RefundHost

I will say one thing for Harlan:

Harlan ripped into that site BECAUSE he cares.
If Harlan ( or me, above ) did not LIKE the guy, see his potential,
and WANT him to SUCCEED ... we'd just say NOTHING.

Harlan is not the guy's mom who will say "Oh that's lovely" even though it wont perform. Harlan has years of study and comprehension of the psychology behind the response > conversion vs. surf-away

I get neg feedback all the time when I say the things that WILL HELP.
( Even took a dig at Harlan on his own thread - but I also give credit where credit is due )

Nobody put as much effort into encouraging the OP as Harlan just did.

To then be chastised and advised to "give the guy some encouragement"
is the most ridiculous thing ever.

Well there we disagree.

All I saw was Harlan positioning himself. Marketing himself. Why? Because his name got used initially. If his name had not been used there's no way he would have put in an appearance. That's what I reckon.

As for the so called video critique, hmmm. See above.

A professional copywriting video critique is much longer than that example and much more comprehensive and detailed.