Does this make sense?

michalis · 08-06-2011, 10:30 AM

For a healthy nutrition product, made of very natural ingredients I would like to have this tagline on the package:

"a mother earth purely delivery"

does this phrase make complete sense to a common English?

butter1 · 08-06-2011, 10:44 AM

Nope lol... stick to something a bit more simple
this makes more sense: 'An amazing delivery from mother nature'
source: i'm from england

John_S · 08-06-2011, 10:52 AM

"a mother earth purely delivery"

Sounds like English is not your first language.

michalis · 08-06-2011, 10:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by John_S

"a mother earth purely delivery"

Sounds like English is not your first language.

yeap its not. thats why i am asking you

nagendrabandi1980 · 08-06-2011, 10:59 AM

"a mother earth purely delivery" is not looking that good as you are not native English speaker that bound to happen. You need to generate phrase that strikes to anyone mind very quickly, all the best.

Rockwell · 08-08-2011, 04:59 PM

It does not make any sense. Maybe something like:

Mother Earth. Purely Delivered. (still, doesn't really make much sense though)...

Ken_Caudill · 08-08-2011, 05:04 PM

A delivery from pure Mother Earth?

michalis · 08-08-2011, 05:22 PM

Thank you all for your replies. Finally, I tend to prefer mother nature than mother earth, so I will work upon it. Thanx again!

rkat55 · 08-09-2011, 06:14 PM

Nutrition As Pure and Wholesome As Mother Nature

Nutrition Delivered by Mother Nature - Pure and Natural

Cam Connor · 08-09-2011, 08:31 PM

"Provided Purely by Mother Nature"... would work.

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michalis Warrior Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Does this make sense? For a healthy nutrition product, made of very natural ingredients I would like to have this tagline on the package: "a mother earth purely delivery" does this phrase make complete sense to a common English?

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michalis Warrior Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Does this make sense? Thank you all for your replies. Finally, I tend to prefer mother nature than mother earth, so I will work upon it. Thanx again!

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