Review My Article Please

JamesJeffery · 08-12-2011, 09:27 AM

I published this article a while back, and since then I've been out of writing, but I've now got lots of time on my hands and I'm getting back into setting up sites with good content on them.

I want some pointers on my writing. What's good, what's bad etc and if I need to improve.

I don't want to seem as if I'm getting a free backlink, so please copy and paste the site into your browser: weightlossaidsthatwork.com

I have no use for the site above. I set it up for my brother when he got into marketing who didn't use it.

08-12-2011, 09:27 AM	#1
JamesJeffery HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 364 Thanks: 24 Thanked 54 Times in 34 Posts	Review My Article Please I published this article a while back, and since then I've been out of writing, but I've now got lots of time on my hands and I'm getting back into setting up sites with good content on them. I want some pointers on my writing. What's good, what's bad etc and if I need to improve. I don't want to seem as if I'm getting a free backlink, so please copy and paste the site into your browser: weightlossaidsthatwork.com I have no use for the site above. I set it up for my brother when he got into marketing who didn't use it.