Could you check my website please ? Thanks !

by Gijsbertus

Posted: 13 years ago 7 replies

COPY WRITING

I have set up a (free hosted) website I would appreciate your comments !

Home - BE FOUND ON THE WEB - LET US HELP YOU!

Thank you for your time !

#check #website

Chr 13 years ago

Site works well. I might change the font to something nicer like Arial. I don't mean to offend you but search engine submission and traffic and kinda garbage products so I would recommend not selling them. Also just a heads up, you may run into problems with the free hosting once your website starts getting a decent amount of traffic.
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- Gijsbertus 13 years ago
  
  Thanks Chr - I will change to Arial and check - as for the products offered...well it needs some ''tweaking'' to
  About the free hosting ..I will check your offer
  
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donaldwilson 13 years ago

Originally Posted by Gijsbertus

I have set up a (free hosted) website I would appreciate your comments !

Home - BE FOUND ON THE WEB - LET US HELP YOU!

Thank you for your time !

Well that's a really general question.

What do you need more help with?

Are you talking look at it from a design standpoint?

A SEO standpoint?

I need to know how you plan to market it to help you answer that question.

be a little more specific please

-don
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Elle Davies 13 years ago

I agree with Chr, the font needs to be changed to something a little nicer to look at, other than that, it's an easy enough site to navigate...

One suggestion; try changing the chunk of writing on the Home page to bullet points or spread it out as a list so it reads more like this maybe:
Click thru Craigslist graphic ads will increase the amount of traffic to your website!

Get a professionally designed clickable image ad with text, that will usher them right to you!

I will email you the code back to you, just copy and paste in your Craigslist ad under your own Craigslist account.

Hope this helps,
Elle
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- Gijsbertus 13 years ago
  
  Thanks Elle, very constructif comments - I already applied them !
  
  Thanks Don, I was thinking about the design mainly, yes, but if you could shine a light on the SEO would be great as well !
  
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  Elle Davies 13 years ago
  
  Great! Already, that's so much easier to read!
  
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  Gijsbertus 13 years ago
  
  Thanks for all comments so far - maybe I should delete the calendar ?
  
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