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Old 08-13-2011, 03:39 PM   #1
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I have set up a (free hosted) website I would appreciate your comments !

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Old 08-13-2011, 03:52 PM   #2
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Site works well. I might change the font to something nicer like Arial. I don't mean to offend you but search engine submission and traffic and kinda garbage products so I would recommend not selling them. Also just a heads up, you may run into problems with the free hosting once your website starts getting a decent amount of traffic.
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Old 08-13-2011, 03:58 PM   #3
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Thanks Chr - I will change to Arial and check - as for the products offered...well it needs some ''tweaking'' to
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Old 08-13-2011, 04:02 PM   #4
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I have set up a (free hosted) website I would appreciate your comments !

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Well that's a really general question.

What do you need more help with?

Are you talking look at it from a design standpoint?

A SEO standpoint?

I need to know how you plan to market it to help you answer that question.

be a little more specific please

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I agree with Chr, the font needs to be changed to something a little nicer to look at, other than that, it's an easy enough site to navigate...

One suggestion; try changing the chunk of writing on the Home page to bullet points or spread it out as a list so it reads more like this maybe:
Click thru Craigslist graphic ads will increase the amount of traffic to your website!

Get a professionally designed clickable image ad with text, that will usher them right to you!

I will email you the code back to you, just copy and paste in your Craigslist ad under your own Craigslist account.

Hope this helps,
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Old 08-14-2011, 06:41 AM   #6
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Thanks Elle, very constructif comments - I already applied them !

Thanks Don, I was thinking about the design mainly, yes, but if you could shine a light on the SEO would be great as well !

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Great! Already, that's so much easier to read!
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Thanks for all comments so far - maybe I should delete the calendar ?

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