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01-19-2009, 03:53 PM
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|  PLR WSO Copy
copy is below, any suggestions on how to improve it? Thank you in advance. Premium Weight Loss PLR Content from Articles-Written.com >>> 5 high quality articles per pack limited to 15 people each! <<< This is an offer you won't see for very long. Our content is hot because it's high quality, unique and ready to go. Whether you want to take this PLR and use it for articles, site content, blog posts, or autoresponder messages all you have to do is copy and paste. Each pack is limited to only 15 people so this PLR is sure to stay exclusive and HOT. Even better this offer is only available to Warriors. Period. Each pack is a mix of different keyword rich, LSI optimized weight loss related content that range from 250+ to 500+ words each. Preview of the content you receive and the format:  $10 - Order Pack 1
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02-03-2009, 03:56 PM
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I think it looks great! It's laid out very well and I like how it's broken up. I also like the fact that there are multiple packs to choose from. Good luck!  |
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02-03-2009, 04:10 PM
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I would suggest adding some urgency to it...don't let the reader procrastinate (one of the biggest killers of sales!). Also, there might be too many choices of packs...it might get overwhelming for the reader. I would change the headline a bit too. Add some spice to it. Make it exciting. Something that really makes the audience want to continue reading. Maybe add something about the benefits that you would get from the product. Hope it helps. ~Sarah Johnson |
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02-08-2009, 01:03 AM
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| Active Warrior War Room Member  Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Midwest USA
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| Re: PLR WSO Copy
I purchased 2 packs but only received one. Have tried to reach you. Please reply. I apparently do not have enough posts to PM you.
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