Ya Think This is Believable?

Harlan · 01-31-2012, 04:16 PM

I would have posted this sooner but I needed to reach for my credit card first....

"I'm not even joking about this selling out fast. The tickets could be gone in the next hour there's so much demand for this event! HURRY! Seriously Hurry!"

Ya better hurry...

Snicker...

MikeyDreamboat · 01-31-2012, 05:01 PM

I don't know what ad that is for, but when I worked for Ticketmaster wayyyyy back in the day it was routine to sell out an event in less than an hour.

Generally these performers didn't have to create sales letters or work on keyword optimization or anything though lol.

Joe Ditzel · 01-31-2012, 07:23 PM

Or when it says "DO IT RIGHT NOW!! I'M SERIOUS, DO IT NOW!!"

Hmm.

mackhill · 02-01-2012, 09:39 PM

What kind of person posts something like this in the Warrior Forum?

Think about this people.

says a LOT.

Harlan · 02-02-2012, 11:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mackhill

What kind of person posts something like this in the Warrior Forum?

Think about this people.

says a LOT.

Hmm, you joined the WF three years ago.

This is your second post ever.

Let's all lean in to listen to every word of wisdom coming out of your mouth.

Or not.

The Copy Nazi · 02-02-2012, 12:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mackhill

What kind of person posts something like this in the Warrior Forum?

Think about this people.

says a LOT.

To me it says a well-known and highly-paid copywriter who's been around the track more than a few times is commenting on a crap piece of copy. What does it say to you Einstein?

tomokun · 02-03-2012, 11:37 AM

Wait! What event is it! I MUST KNOW!

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02-03-2012, 11:37 AM	#7
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