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I need a professional sales letter , can you help me?

by romanos8 Banned
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I don't know if this is the right forum to ask for the design of a sales letter as you may be know I am selling this product in the WSO http://www.warriorforum.com/warrior-...ge-google.html So I need a sales letter for my sales page (website) Mega Robot Bomber I need the sales letter with the option to add :
Introduction of my person
Introduction of the software
videos
testimonials(warrior forum testimonials)
pictures
features
of course the body of the sales letter.

Please reply if you can do it or you know a good sales letter designer.
#letter #professional #sales
  • Profile picture of the author romanos8
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    Please I know my sales letter is very bad also I apologize for my bad English.
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    • Profile picture of the author romanos8
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      Also I want to know how much for a sales letter for my WSO (warrior forum sale letter).So Now I asking for two sales letter :
      1-My website
      2-WSO
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      • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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        Follow the direct call to action when you
        click on the link below in my signature and
        we can talk business.

        Warmest regards,


        Mark Andrews
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        • Profile picture of the author romanos8
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          Thanks very nice service I am waiting to check others offers to take a decision.
          Originally Posted by Mark Andrews View Post

          Follow the direct call to action when you
          click on the link below in my signature and
          we can talk business.

          Warmest regards,


          Mark Andrews
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    Just an FYI for anyone who reads this thread and is thinking about using this sub-forum to find the perfect copywriter...

    ...You'll NEVER find the kind of financial success you're looking for in your IM endeavors - unless you know how much money you want to invest in your copy and what you expect in return.

    Any time you're ambiguous about your budget and post a low-balling thread like this, you're exposing the fact that you do NOT think like a successful entrepreneur.

    Therefore...

    No copywriter, with any credibility, will EVER pursue you and help you become successful.

    Why?

    Because you're not bringing respect and the ability to communicate to the table.

    I don't care how good of a product or service you THINK you have...

    ...unless you take the action steps that reveal you're a real-deal entrepreneur, you'll be chasing the money for the entirety of your career.

    Do your due diligence and research all of the amazing copywriters here...

    ...and approach the one you're drawn to with your budget, vision and expectations.

    Fantastic things will happen...

    Mark Pescetti
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    • Profile picture of the author Big Rob
      Originally Posted by Reflection Marketing View Post

      Just an FYI for anyone who reads this thread and is thinking about using this sub-forum to find the perfect copywriter...YUP...that would be me, CALL ME MR.GREEN

      ...You'll NEVER find the kind of financial success you're looking for in your IM endeavors - unless you know how much money you want to invest in your copy and what you expect in return.
      $100 and %10 conversion value copy
      Any time you're ambiguous about your budget and post a low-balling thread like this, you're exposing the fact that you do NOT think like a successful entrepreneur. Kind of a broad stroke, wouldn't you say?
      like"You Copywriters are a vicious lot." see below
      Therefore...

      No copywriter, with any credibility, will EVER pursue you and help you become successful. Nice. So anyone who chooses to help the OP has no credibility? pompous,man,pompous.

      Why?

      Because you're not bringing respect and the ability to communicate to the table. Unless their perception of respect differs from yours, and english is not their first language.

      I don't care how good of a product or service you THINK you have...
      YOU,the copywriter, SHOULD be able to write converting copy for ANY product

      ...unless you take the action steps that reveal you're a real-deal entrepreneur, you'll be chasing the money for the entirety of your career.
      Developing a product and recognizing that you need help does not qualify for Your definition of "real-deal" ? and again with the " you'll never make it"

      Do your due diligence and research all of the amazing copywriters here...
      Yup. and some downright arrogant ones, too.

      ...and approach the one you're drawn to with your budget, vision and expectations.And be prepared to be shot down and discouraged, because you dont meet the CWs expectations as a customer.

      Fantastic things will happen...

      Mark Pescetti
      You have a very nice site, Mark. You are obviously very successful, and have a ton of experience and knowledge.I think your business approach toward your clients is impressive, definitely client centric and what I would expect from any vendor. Surprising that the comments above came from the same guy.

      Think back when you first started and the budget was tight. Did you have doubts? Did you have the "Millionaire mindset"? maybe so.
      Many of us are struggling for many different reasons, but i don't believe its due to self imposed limitations as you imply.

      And speaking of being ambiguous, I would imagine your fees, since not clearly listed, fall under the " If you have to ask you can't afford it" category.

      I don't know, Man. Maybe it's just me. I like to think I treat everyone with respect and try to be polite. Imho It doesnt make sense to discourage someone, due to a difference of perception.

      Regards,
      Rob
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      • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
        Originally Posted by Big Rob View Post

        You have a very nice site, Mark. You are obviously very successful, and have a ton of experience and knowledge.I think your business approach toward your clients is impressive, definitely client centric and what I would expect from any vendor. Surprising that the comments above came from the same guy.

        Think back when you first started and the budget was tight. Did you have doubts? Did you have the "Millionaire mindset"? maybe so.
        Many of us are struggling for many different reasons, but i don't believe its due to self imposed limitations as you imply.

        And speaking of being ambiguous, I would imagine your fees, since not clearly listed, fall under the " If you have to ask you can't afford it" category.

        I don't know, Man. Maybe it's just me. I like to think I treat everyone with respect and try to be polite. Imho It doesnt make sense to discourage someone, due to a difference of perception.

        Regards,
        Rob
        Hey Rob!

        I totally respect your feedback.

        I can clearly see where you're coming from and I'm not faulting it for a second.

        But you know what they say about assumptions, don't you?

        I don't list my prices for a reason (at least on my main site.)

        And nope, it's not because my rates are top shelf (I guess depending upon what you think is expensive. Most of my projects run between $4000 & $6000.)

        I actually don't make a living from writing copy for clients.

        Sure, I make good money, yes.

        But my living is made by creating and selling my own products.

        And I do know way more about struggle than I care to mention, but for entertainment sake, here are just a few experiences I've created:

        ...I was a professional boxer/martial artist and broke my back (in a real fight). I was told I would never walk again. There went my living.

        ...I lived in my car for almost two years combined during my youth.

        ...I lost everything I built up when my daughter was born and went into debt (to the tune of over $80,000) trying to promote a few products I created.

        ...I didn't get passed the 4th grade in school; I don't even have a high school equivalency. So getting a good job wasn't even a possibility when my endeavors failed.

        ...My single mother was very poor and having any food in the fridge while I was growing up was a reasons celebrate.

        Those are just a few examples.

        So what?

        Does experiencing struggle qualify me for understanding what most entrepreneurs go through to become successful?

        Did I have doubts?

        Every single second, of every single day brother.

        Which is exactly why I put up posts like the one you reacted to...

        ...because people who are vague with their budget and expectations expose their lack of belief and faith in what they're selling.

        After all...

        If I were someone looking for a copywriter, I would have to REALLY believe in what I'm putting out there to justify my investment.

        I would have to believe success is inevitable.

        Because why else go into a venture... if you didn't FEEL at a deep, deep level that success is yours for the taking.

        And from that perspective, why the hell wouldn't you do everything in your power to hire the very best you can afford to help make your dreams a reality?

        Well...

        I can answer that myself:

        ...Fear.

        ...Scarcity thinking.

        ...Paranoia that I'll be ripped off.

        ...Feeling suspicious that if I show all my financial cards, I'll be ripped off.

        ...Thinking that my budget won't be enough to warrant my lofty expectations.

        I get it.

        But if entrepreneurs want to become successful and overcome the obstacles that almost every self made millionaire must go through to rise above their own past, then you've got to be transparent about your budget and expectations.

        The worst that can happen is the copywriter you want will say no.

        Big deal.

        Again though... I respect where you're coming from and appreciate your feedback about me.

        Mark Pescetti

        P.S. I've helped out 4 warriors this month for free. And taken on a rather large project for nothing upfront - with the promise of a HUGE backend. Truth be told, I despise JV's. But every once in a while, someone comes along that turns me on more than popping a couple Viagra. And no, I'm not advertising myself for people who fear putting their own money on the line for help, but I respect the hell out of aspiring entrepreneurs who don't pull any punches.
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  • Profile picture of the author masterz
    My Advice if you would yield to it...

    1. Go to the warriors for hire section and look for copywriters who are offering their services. you can then contact them. am sure you will find what you are looking for

    2. you can also pay for a thread in that same section - warriors for hire- that you are looking for a copywriter.

    i hope this helps
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  • Profile picture of the author hoffman
    I want to know how many professional sales letter you need. pm me.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rich Ray
    a right forum is warrior for hire, there you can hire some people to write your sales letter with a cheap price. here --> Warriors For Hire
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  • Profile picture of the author Jason Kanigan
    Honestly, though, you are going to get nothing of value for $100. Read this. I give it to all my potential clients and if they don't agree with it, we shake hands and part ways.

    You'd be better off begging a copywriter to help you for free out of pity. I'm serious. Go try it.

    Or you could go to fiverr and get 20 junk letters to throw at your prospects lol.

    It's not being mean to have to say you cannot afford the new Bently on the used Ford Festiva budget. Just reality.

    You do have another option, though...offer the writer a percentage of sales. That might attract a good copywriter.
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    • Profile picture of the author Big Rob
      Originally Posted by kaniganj View Post

      Honestly, though, you are going to get nothing of value for $100. Read this. I give it to all my potential clients and if they don't agree with it, we shake hands and part ways.

      You'd be better off begging a copywriter to help you for free out of pity. I'm serious. Go try it.

      Or you could go to fiverr and get 20 junk letters to throw at your prospects lol.

      It's not being mean to have to say you cannot afford the new Bently on the used Ford Festiva budget. Just reality.

      You do have another option, though...offer the writer a percentage of sales. That might attract a good copywriter.
      Thank you, Mr K.

      And you are correct, I can't afford the bentley, not at the moment.

      And I don't want pity, but pro bono would be graciously accepted.

      Fiverr -Yuck

      Percentage of the sales sounds feasible.

      All good info
      Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
    Hi Eduardos,

    I like what you're doing. I hope you're making some money at it.

    I'll give you some advice: a strategy to leverage what you're already doing, as well as the copy you've already got in place.

    Before I do that, in looking at your WSO, it's obvious to me you spend a lot of your time focused on your product. Not only are you spending the time, you are giving best efforts to fix bugs and glitches, enhance the applications AND support your customers--all at the same time.

    Customers are appreciative of your work and your friendly personal support while patient with you resolving problems and writing documentation.

    From a software developer, you can't ask for much more than that.

    And while there are some bugs and glitches in it, on a project of this size, no one can expect it to be bug free. Especially with the relentless changes created by the websites your product interacts with.

    So here's what you might want to consider: embrace what's true. At the beginning of your WSO, before anything else, say something like this in red:
    "My name is Eduardos Romanos. I develop this product myself. I am sorry if my copy and documentation are not so good. I wrote this copy myself.

    But please look at the reviews and posts below. I try to spend all my time developing better software and supporting customers. I want to make my price affordable, so I did not budget for expensive copywriter. But if you have questions, please ask them below. I will answer them fast as I can."
    Just use your own words with what I just gave you. Just say what's true for you. I think it will be amazing.

    The above copy intentionally breaks rules. But here's the strategy: "Ugly works." You may not need to bring in an expensive copywriter to get the job done. You're also leveraging the documented goodwill you've already garnered.

    The second thing I'd consider is renaming the product. One of your prospects or customers called it "the beast." I like that name and it fits the product.

    Obviously you have copywriters here vying for your attention. But from what you write, to do the product justice, a copywriter's going to need to spend some major time with it.

    So save your money until you can afford to pay someone what he or she is worth to hit it out of the park, copy and marketing-wise. Where the copy exceeds the product descriptions in terms of lifting the hopes and expectations of your prospects.

    - Rick Duris
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