Need Copywriting Help? Get 6% conversion

thom2009 · 02-23-2009, 06:54 PM

I'm glad you guys that e-mailed me like what I'm able to show you. But I want to repost. I see a ton of people asking to have their writing critiqued so I wanted to change the title. Sorry for those of you that are reading this again...

You know, I've read a ton of posts in this forum and it has great comments and ideas. Some great stuff but some bad stuff as well.

So recently, I was called "One of the Best Internet Marketers in the World" by Myshoppinggenie.com after they were consulted by Stephen Pierce to get stronger copywriting on their page. They weren't getting great conversion even though they've been featured on CNN and the Today Show (which is amazing, not that they were on the shows but that they couldn't convert after that type of publicity).

So I've been writing copy that's been killing for a long time. I write for a lot of "famous" internet marketers including James Martell, Richard Legg and many others I can't mention due to NDAs.

But when people hire me, I quickly realize they aren't making money because of weak copy but also the set up of their site (many don't even have things like sign up pages, don't effectively use tetimonials, don't use their guarantee like a bonus, ect).

So I've decided to offer anyone out there, who has a website that isn't making money online, to send me their e-mail and URL and I'll evaluate it and offer everything I see without any fees. Honestly I enjoy doing it but I think it's about time people start educating people about their internet marketing flaws instead of praying on their lack of knowledge.

So if you have a site, think it offers a great product (s) but are disappointed with the results, send me an e-mail at Get Site Help to Google e-mail. I'm happy to review your site/sales page and tell you what I think. I'll list all my thoughts and let you determine if these are things are items you want to implement, if you want to discuss it further, ect. But I have a niche website that does over $9k per month on autopilot so I've been really successful online. I'm happy to offer the URL when you e-mail me.

Obviously I'm not a charity worker and I'm happy to consult and write copy for people that need help (my elance username is thom2009 if anyone wants to check up on me!). But instead of talking about who I've worked for and my high conversion rates. I will give you a thorough review, no risk, make up an e-mail address for this if you like if you concerned about this as a list building.

Send any questions to the gmail account.

Thanks!

02-23-2009, 06:54 PM	#1
thom2009 Warrior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Need Copywriting Help? Get 6% conversion I'm glad you guys that e-mailed me like what I'm able to show you. But I want to repost. I see a ton of people asking to have their writing critiqued so I wanted to change the title. Sorry for those of you that are reading this again... You know, I've read a ton of posts in this forum and it has great comments and ideas. Some great stuff but some bad stuff as well. So recently, I was called "One of the Best Internet Marketers in the World" by Myshoppinggenie.com after they were consulted by Stephen Pierce to get stronger copywriting on their page. They weren't getting great conversion even though they've been featured on CNN and the Today Show (which is amazing, not that they were on the shows but that they couldn't convert after that type of publicity). So I've been writing copy that's been killing for a long time. I write for a lot of "famous" internet marketers including James Martell, Richard Legg and many others I can't mention due to NDAs. But when people hire me, I quickly realize they aren't making money because of weak copy but also the set up of their site (many don't even have things like sign up pages, don't effectively use tetimonials, don't use their guarantee like a bonus, ect). So I've decided to offer anyone out there, who has a website that isn't making money online, to send me their e-mail and URL and I'll evaluate it and offer everything I see without any fees. Honestly I enjoy doing it but I think it's about time people start educating people about their internet marketing flaws instead of praying on their lack of knowledge. So if you have a site, think it offers a great product (s) but are disappointed with the results, send me an e-mail at Get Site Help to Google e-mail. I'm happy to review your site/sales page and tell you what I think. I'll list all my thoughts and let you determine if these are things are items you want to implement, if you want to discuss it further, ect. But I have a niche website that does over $9k per month on autopilot so I've been really successful online. I'm happy to offer the URL when you e-mail me. Obviously I'm not a charity worker and I'm happy to consult and write copy for people that need help (my elance username is thom2009 if anyone wants to check up on me!). But instead of talking about who I've worked for and my high conversion rates. I will give you a thorough review, no risk, make up an e-mail address for this if you like if you concerned about this as a list building. Send any questions to the gmail account. Thanks!