Best "Get Out"...

Steve The Copywriter · 05-18-2012, 04:27 AM

Thought this was a brilliant disclaimer on Mr Kerns latest email.

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY,
WE BOTH KNOW DAMN GOOD AND WELL
THAT JUST BECAUSE BRENDON MADE A BUNCH
OF MONEY DOESN'T MEAN (OR IMPLY) THAT
THE SAME WILL HAPPEN TO YOU OR ANYBODY
ELSE.

THERE IS NO PRODUCT, WEBINAR, SEMINAR, GURU,
COACHING PROGRAM, POTION, OR ANYTHING
ELSE THAT WILL MAKE YOU SUCCESSFUL.

YOU HAVE TO WORK LIKE A PSYCHOTIC ANIMAL
...RELENTLESSLY REACHING FOR YOUR GOALS.

THE ONLY GUARANTEE YOU CAN COUNT ON
IS THIS: YOU WILL EXPERIENCE HARSHIP.
YOU WILL EXPERIENCE FAILURE. YOU WILL
EXPERIENCE DISAPPOINTMENT.

IT IS IN THE MOMENTS THAT YOU GET UP,
BRUSH YOURSELF OFF, AND CLIMB BACK INTO
THE RING TO CONTINUE FIGHTING THAT YOU WILL
FIND SUCCESS.

IF THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR YOU, GET OFF MY
LIST.

Steve

RedShifted · 05-19-2012, 06:05 PM

Thats really cool I enjoyed that.

Makes me want to get on his list now. =]

-Red

Bill Jeffels · 05-27-2012, 08:02 AM

Awsome way of a must have disclaimer and adding some cool to it.

-Jeffels

WinstonTian · 05-27-2012, 08:33 AM

lolol

Been years, but he's still the same Kern. My
only issue lies on that devastating wall of
capital letters.

My eyes, oh, god.

The power of a following, I guess.

Raydal · 05-27-2012, 09:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter

Thought this was a brilliant disclaimer on Mr Kerns latest email.

Steve

Care to share what you found so brilliant about it?

-Ray Edwards

Steve The Copywriter · 05-27-2012, 11:06 AM

It's a lot more fun than the usual "get outs"

Which are usually boring legalise copy, densely typed, trying to be hidden - desperately hoping not to be noticed.

In all things IM - you've got to have disclaimers - so why not use them properly. And be real.

I think it gets more genuine sales. And reduces the orders and inevitiable refunds from the "money for nothing brigades"

This one has personality, humour and empathy - even with the caps, it's meant to be read.

And it's honest.

Steve

P.S. Ray, I realize you may not have been thrilled with the line "for the love of all that is holy" but I don't think it was ever intended to be offensive to anyones religion.

Raydal · 05-27-2012, 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Steve The Copywriter

P.S. Ray, I realize you may not have been thrilled with the line "for the love of all that is holy" but I don't think it was ever intended to be offensive to anyones religion.

Not really my point at all. I just thought that your post was too much
of a teaser and left us hanging. Now that you gave your explanations
then my mind can rest.

For sure, the points you made are valid.

-Ray Edwards

JoshClick · 05-27-2012, 07:02 PM

I do love Kern's bravado.

By any chance, do you any of you know of where I can get on his list?

He makes it so hard to buy his products even though I'm sure there are thousands of people out there clawing their hair out because it's impossible to get them anymore.

05-18-2012, 04:27 AM	#1
Steve The Copywriter Ads That Work War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: England UK Posts: 1,501 Thanks: 1,218 Thanked 1,084 Times in 669 Posts	Best "Get Out"... Thought this was a brilliant disclaimer on Mr Kerns latest email. FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, WE BOTH KNOW DAMN GOOD AND WELL THAT JUST BECAUSE BRENDON MADE A BUNCH OF MONEY DOESN'T MEAN (OR IMPLY) THAT THE SAME WILL HAPPEN TO YOU OR ANYBODY ELSE. THERE IS NO PRODUCT, WEBINAR, SEMINAR, GURU, COACHING PROGRAM, POTION, OR ANYTHING ELSE THAT WILL MAKE YOU SUCCESSFUL. YOU HAVE TO WORK LIKE A PSYCHOTIC ANIMAL ...RELENTLESSLY REACHING FOR YOUR GOALS. THE ONLY GUARANTEE YOU CAN COUNT ON IS THIS: YOU WILL EXPERIENCE HARSHIP. YOU WILL EXPERIENCE FAILURE. YOU WILL EXPERIENCE DISAPPOINTMENT. IT IS IN THE MOMENTS THAT YOU GET UP, BRUSH YOURSELF OFF, AND CLIMB BACK INTO THE RING TO CONTINUE FIGHTING THAT YOU WILL FIND SUCCESS. IF THIS IS TOO MUCH FOR YOU, GET OFF MY LIST. Steve
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05-19-2012, 06:05 PM	#2
RedShifted Sell or Die Join Date: Dec 2011 Location: Central NJ Posts: 1,983 Thanks: 664 Thanked 1,239 Times in 610 Posts	Re: Best "Get Out"... Thats really cool I enjoyed that. Makes me want to get on his list now. =] -Red

05-27-2012, 08:02 AM	#3
Bill Jeffels Copywriter / Marketer War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 453 Thanks: 175 Thanked 109 Times in 95 Posts	Re: Best "Get Out"... Awsome way of a must have disclaimer and adding some cool to it. -Jeffels
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05-27-2012, 08:33 AM	#4
WinstonTian The Beginner's Doctor Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 280 Thanks: 123 Thanked 107 Times in 81 Posts	Re: Best "Get Out"... lolol Been years, but he's still the same Kern. My only issue lies on that devastating wall of capital letters. My eyes, oh, god. The power of a following, I guess.
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05-27-2012, 11:06 AM	#6
Steve The Copywriter Ads That Work War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: England UK Posts: 1,501 Thanks: 1,218 Thanked 1,084 Times in 669 Posts	Re: Best "Get Out"... It's a lot more fun than the usual "get outs" Which are usually boring legalise copy, densely typed, trying to be hidden - desperately hoping not to be noticed. In all things IM - you've got to have disclaimers - so why not use them properly. And be real. I think it gets more genuine sales. And reduces the orders and inevitiable refunds from the "money for nothing brigades" This one has personality, humour and empathy - even with the caps, it's meant to be read. And it's honest. Steve P.S. Ray, I realize you may not have been thrilled with the line "for the love of all that is holy" but I don't think it was ever intended to be offensive to anyones religion.
	Ads That Work - They're so irresistible. Your people just have to buy Want Your Advertising To Get A Much Higher Response And Greater Profits? Just PM me. Or read this- http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...right-now.html

05-27-2012, 07:02 PM	#8
JoshClick Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: New York City, USA Posts: 15 Thanks: 16 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: Best "Get Out"... I do love Kern's bravado. By any chance, do you any of you know of where I can get on his list? He makes it so hard to buy his products even though I'm sure there are thousands of people out there clawing their hair out because it's impossible to get them anymore.