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Old 04-04-2009, 09:01 AM   #1
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Default From non-native speaker: Please check my reviews

Hello, not long ago I've posted my website link in the main forum to get some critiqe, and a lot of people guessed that I'm not a native speaker, thus I had an Idea to show you my review-articles.

Please help me make them look OK, because lot's of people say that my content is kinda "clumsy" to read.

P.S.: here's the link to my site: TattooSpot.net

Thanx in advance,
Valentine Spitsyn
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Default Re: From non-native speaker: Please check my reviews

Hi, Valentine.

The graphic design is excellent.

You need to hire an English proofreader. If you let this person know that you do not need their help about the ideas, just spelling and punctuation, it should be inexpensive.

More than half the links are broken: Articles, Blog, Free, About all give a server error message.

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