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Old 04-18-2009, 02:26 AM   #1
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Dear All Fellow Warriors,

Ehm.. i surely believe in myself when i rewrite a winner copy written by outstanding copywriter such as Gary Halbert, John Carlton etc... its help my brain start working better. And obviously its works also if you do the same too.

I have accomplished a few ads such as (all are recommended by Gary Halbert):

"Do You Make These Mistakes In English?"

"The Nancy L. Halbert Heraldry Letter"


"The Lazy Man's Way To Riches"


And "At 60 Miles An Hour The Loudest Noise In This Rolls Royce Is The Ticking Of The Electric Clock"

The problem is i can't find a few of them such as:

"The Admiral Byrd Transpolar Expedition Letter"


"How To Collect From Social Security At Any Age"


"Why Men Crack"


"How To Burn Off Body Fat, Hour-By-Hour"

"What Everybody Should Know About This Stock And Bond Business"

Again, i believe that every fellow warriors here have the collection of ads above in pdf file, etc save on theier harddisk.

Help me, where i can find it. To accomplishing my rewriting done well.

Regards

Juri Saragih


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Old 06-19-2010, 01:56 PM   #2
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Here. This might help: For Copywriters | Ryan McGrath

Take a short survey. No sales pitch.
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Admiral Byrd: http://copytest.googlepages.com/Expe...BestLetter.pdf

[edit]Oh wow.. Forgot to read the response by BlueWillow. That site got it all!

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Dear All Fellow Warriors,

Ehm.. i surely believe in myself when i rewrite a winner copy written by outstanding copywriter such as Gary Halbert, John Carlton etc... its help my brain start working better. And obviously its works also if you do the same too.

I have accomplished a few ads such as (all are recommended by Gary Halbert):

"Do You Make These Mistakes In English?"

"The Nancy L. Halbert Heraldry Letter"


"The Lazy Man's Way To Riches"


And "At 60 Miles An Hour The Loudest Noise In This Rolls Royce Is The Ticking Of The Electric Clock"

The problem is i can't find a few of them such as:

"The Admiral Byrd Transpolar Expedition Letter"


"How To Collect From Social Security At Any Age"


"Why Men Crack"


"How To Burn Off Body Fat, Hour-By-Hour"

"What Everybody Should Know About This Stock And Bond Business"

Again, i believe that every fellow warriors here have the collection of ads above in pdf file, etc save on theier harddisk.

Help me, where i can find it. To accomplishing my rewriting done well.

Regards
Ive done all of these myself long time ago. I found them all on google. Every single one of them can be found using the search engine.
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Old 06-22-2010, 03:45 PM   #5
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If you're looking for swipes, you definitely need to check out Info Marketing Blog | Direct Response Marketing | Copywriting -- it's one of the best out there.

As for your list...

How to Collect Social Security At Any Age:

Gary Halbert Ad #9: How To Collect Social Security at Any Age

What Everybody Should Know About This Stock and Bond Business: Click on the image in the article at:

Merrill Lynch Remembered

I couldn't find a link to "Why Men Crack" online, but I've attached it to this post. I think Ryan McGrath may have a copy in his online swipe file -- see bluewillow's post above.

Hope this helps,

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