How To Swipe Successful Sales Letters

[Raydal]

About every copywriter would boast about his collection of
successful sales letters gathered from the masters of persuasion.
This collection of winning sales copy is commonly referred to as
a swipe file.

The reason behind collecting and studying these winning pieces is
to provide inspiration for writing successful letters, sharpening
your own writing skills and borrowing and adapting headlines and
selling strategies to different markets.

The idea of studying great writers and artist in order to model
them is not new. However, most writers who are new to copywriting
may feel uncomfortable with the level of ‘borrowing’ that go on
within the copywriting and direct marketing industry.

In other writing markets such ‘swiping’ practices may be
considered as plagiarism. But like companies that quickly create
a knock-off version of a successful product, marketers are always
ready to borrow the ideas behind successful advertising
campaigns.

Swiping can be the shortcut to writing winning sales letters or
it can turn into a copycat and lame imitation of the genuine
article and fail miserable. The debate is therefore not whether a
copywriter should swipe or not but how to swipe successful sales
letters effectively.

The practice of swiping can be considered as a continuum. On one
end you have those copywriters who use the original sales letter
as a fill-in-the-blank template, simply making substitutions for
product names and other minor changes.

On the other end of the continuum is the practice of studying the
swipe file to determine the selling strategies and technique
behind the letter and adapting these same techniques in a new
sales letter. In essence, there is copying on one end and
adapting on the other end.

Copying should not be considered as swiping although some
copywriters may argue for the practice. But copying and swiping
are not even distant cousins.

Let’s take one of the most famous direct marketing letters, The
Wall Street Journal ‘two graduates’ letter which brought in over
$2 billion in subscription for the magazine. The letter tells of
two young graduates with apparently equal advantages who on the
25th anniversary of their graduation from college found
themselves in very different positions—one was the president of a
company and the other a manager of a small department of the same
company.

The letter goes on to explain how The Wall Street Journal was the
reason for the success of the one graduate over the other.

Now as the copywriter wanting to use this letter as a swipe I can
simply tell the same story of two graduates at their 25th class
reunion and how my product made the difference in their widely
differing successes. But how practical would this be if I were
selling a lawn care or a weight loss product?

The question that has to be asked by the copywriter is why has
this letter been so successful? What is the real selling strategy
that could be adapted to any product?

According to Robert Collier, “The Adapting is the job. Many
writers make the mistake of thinking that if they copy the
wording of a successful sales letter, their letter is bound to
pull too. There is no bigger mistake. The wording counts for
little. It is the way you adapt the idea back of the successful
letter that counts.” (The Robert Collier Letter Book, p. 148)

Taking this cue from Collier the idea behind this letter is the
comparison between two normal, average people who made a simple
decision that made a huge difference in their lives. Of course
the simple wording of the letter, the use of a story, the subtle
use of the rebirth of spring all go into making the letter
appealing, but the big selling idea is the “what made the
difference” angle to the letter. It’s basically a ‘before’ and
‘after’ shot as used in weight-loss ads.

Here are some suggestions on how to make the best use of swipe
files:

1. Do not try to copy the rote wording but instead the selling
idea behind the letter.

2. Try to adapt and not just copy the letter.

3. Study the market (historical context) for the letter before
you try to adapt it to your present market. Probe for the answers
to the questions as to what has changed and how the strategies
that were considered novel at the time the swipe letter was
written may be now overworked and ineffective.

4. Consider how much the credibility of the letter writer or
product owner accounted for the success of the letter. For
example, The Wall Street Journal already had a lot of credibility
in the market before this letter was used. You may not be able to
mimic that component of the letter.

5. Study the masters of copywriting so you know what to look for
in winning sales letter. What may be transparent to you without
the background knowledge can become visible if you know what to
look for.

The bottom line is that there is an art and a science to swiping
and if you blindly copy successful sales letters and, in effect,
place new wine in old bottles, your sales letter will flop.

-Ray Edwards

[Chris Ramsey]

Thanks for the post Ray.

As always, you've got excellent wisdom in your posts.

I completely agree when you talk about 'adapting' vs 'copying'.

If you're not capturing the reason WHY something works, you'll never improve as a copywriter. It's a huge lesson I learned a while back and have never looked back since.

Thanks again Ray!

[tina0827]

What a great post! I love my swipe file and get sooo many ideas from it. You hit the nail on the head with this one:

2. Try to adapt and not just copy the letter.

Adapting is the art and science of putting your own personality in to what you are creating and in turn developing that KLT Factor! Know-Like-Trust is a must in whatever you do!

Copying is just plain lazy.

Thank you for all your insights!

@Tina_Williams

[djenyns]

Great Post Ray!

How to you start the process of a swipe file?

Do you do niche swipe files? Or like niche swipe files etc?

[Raydal]

Originally Posted by djenyns

Great Post Ray!

How to you start the process of a swipe file?

Do you do niche swipe files? Or like niche swipe files etc?

Swipe files are available for sale, for free and you can create your
own by simply collecting winning sales letter into a folder on you
computer. You can google 'swipe file' and see what comes up.

(Example: http://www.HardToFindAds.com)

You can also subscribe to lists such as Agora publishing and get
tons of sales letters from them. Don't forget your junk mail as well.

-Ray Edwards

[Chris Ramsey]

Originally Posted by djenyns

Great Post Ray!

How to you start the process of a swipe file?

Do you do niche swipe files? Or like niche swipe files etc?

This was a good start for me.

It's a bunch of sales letters, magalogs, and things like that.

FREE Swipe File | The Total Package

Oh yeah. And it's free!

[spressnell]

Great information. I print out and save copies of ads, sales letters, headlines that catch my eye and then use that to give me new ideas. Sometimes 2 unrelated ideas = something great.

Shirley

[magic456]

really good tipa, thak you!

[colmodwyer]

Just to add to Ray's solid post...

The Wall Street Journal letter is itself a swipe...

Copywriting: Wall Street Journal Letter

Here's the original, written by legendary ad man Bruce Barton...

Copywriting: Bruce Barton's Original "Wall Street Journal" Letter

Compare the two so you can see how the WSJ letter is modeled (but not exactly copied) on Bruce Barton's original letter.

And say thanks to Andy Cavanagh for putting these up on his blog!

Colm

[Armaan.Zafar]

Originally Posted by scheda

This was a good start for me.

It's a bunch of sales letters, magalogs, and things like that.

FREE Swipe File | The Total Package

Oh yeah. And it's free!

Thanks for it! I'm just going to check it out right now.

Originally Posted by Raydal

About every copywriter would boast about his collection of
successful sales letters gathered from the masters of persuasion.
This collection of winning sales copy is commonly referred to as
a swipe file.

The reason behind collecting and studying these winning pieces is
to provide inspiration for writing successful letters, sharpening
your own writing skills and borrowing and adapting headlines and
selling strategies to different markets.

The idea of studying great writers and artist in order to model
them is not new. However, most writers who are new to copywriting
may feel uncomfortable with the level of ‘borrowing’ that go on
within the copywriting and direct marketing industry.

In other writing markets such ‘swiping’ practices may be
considered as plagiarism. But like companies that quickly create
a knock-off version of a successful product, marketers are always
ready to borrow the ideas behind successful advertising
campaigns.

Swiping can be the shortcut to writing winning sales letters or
it can turn into a copycat and lame imitation of the genuine
article and fail miserable. The debate is therefore not whether a
copywriter should swipe or not but how to swipe successful sales
letters effectively.

The practice of swiping can be considered as a continuum. On one
end you have those copywriters who use the original sales letter
as a fill-in-the-blank template, simply making substitutions for
product names and other minor changes.

On the other end of the continuum is the practice of studying the
swipe file to determine the selling strategies and technique
behind the letter and adapting these same techniques in a new
sales letter. In essence, there is copying on one end and
adapting on the other end.

Copying should not be considered as swiping although some
copywriters may argue for the practice. But copying and swiping
are not even distant cousins.

Let’s take one of the most famous direct marketing letters, The
Wall Street Journal ‘two graduates’ letter which brought in over
$2 billion in subscription for the magazine. The letter tells of
two young graduates with apparently equal advantages who on the
25th anniversary of their graduation from college found
themselves in very different positions—one was the president of a
company and the other a manager of a small department of the same
company.

The letter goes on to explain how The Wall Street Journal was the
reason for the success of the one graduate over the other.

Now as the copywriter wanting to use this letter as a swipe I can
simply tell the same story of two graduates at their 25th class
reunion and how my product made the difference in their widely
differing successes. But how practical would this be if I were
selling a lawn care or a weight loss product?

The question that has to be asked by the copywriter is why has
this letter been so successful? What is the real selling strategy
that could be adapted to any product?

According to Robert Collier, “The Adapting is the job. Many
writers make the mistake of thinking that if they copy the
wording of a successful sales letter, their letter is bound to
pull too. There is no bigger mistake. The wording counts for
little. It is the way you adapt the idea back of the successful
letter that counts.” (The Robert Collier Letter Book, p. 148)

Taking this cue from Collier the idea behind this letter is the
comparison between two normal, average people who made a simple
decision that made a huge difference in their lives. Of course
the simple wording of the letter, the use of a story, the subtle
use of the rebirth of spring all go into making the letter
appealing, but the big selling idea is the “what made the
difference” angle to the letter. It’s basically a ‘before’ and
‘after’ shot as used in weight-loss ads.

Here are some suggestions on how to make the best use of swipe
files:

1. Do not try to copy the rote wording but instead the selling
idea behind the letter.

2. Try to adapt and not just copy the letter.

3. Study the market (historical context) for the letter before
you try to adapt it to your present market. Probe for the answers
to the questions as to what has changed and how the strategies
that were considered novel at the time the swipe letter was
written may be now overworked and ineffective.

4. Consider how much the credibility of the letter writer or
product owner accounted for the success of the letter. For
example, The Wall Street Journal already had a lot of credibility
in the market before this letter was used. You may not be able to
mimic that component of the letter.

5. Study the masters of copywriting so you know what to look for
in winning sales letter. What may be transparent to you without
the background knowledge can become visible if you know what to
look for.

The bottom line is that there is an art and a science to swiping
and if you blindly copy successful sales letters and, in effect,
place new wine in old bottles, your sales letter will flop.

-Ray Edwards

Wow Ray! What a great post.

There is a saying in Sanskrit that
you learn one/fourth from your
teacher, one/fourth from your
parents, one/fourth from your
brain and one/fourth from your
peers.

Studying your peers, colleagues
and digging on to why they did
what they did helps a lot crafting
your own projects.

Great tip!