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Anomoly... First, Mabuhay! If you're getting 2-3% for blind traffic then I have a ton of work for you and you will no longer be poor. Please send me a sample of your 2-3% converting sales copy. |
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I guess it would be the same story to find a good artist or actor or any good talent for $97, chances are, never in a million years.
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I will see what I can find on my cds. I am just now rebuilding from nothing but personally, I thought those numbers were pretty average. I know when I was doing real world marketing, I expected nothing less than five percent from a "blind" mailing. Now before I go making an ass out of myself, by blind traffic I mean no PPC or anything, just whoever happens along the sites. PPC I have never had the luxury of working with. The only sales pages I have done for others were for highly targeted lists in areas I know a bit about. If you are serious, I can do a couple of free pages, test them of your own accord and if you get good results, give me a kick back and a testimonial perhaps. In the meantime, I will break out some cds today ... I lost my old website and pretty much everything else so right now I am working with a cd player on a PII with an 8gig hard drive but I can swing by the net cafe with my DVDs this week and see what I can find. And no, I am not trying to cut anybody's throat here. I am a fairly good marketer for impulse markets and that is where my experience is but yes, I am desperate too LOL (What I would give for a new laptop eh?) so if you are serious and you have a small project you do not mind "risking", I will happy to provide you with a sales page and see what you do with real testing. Mind you, I am not talking about safelists like I am using at the moment ... but with "real traffic" I am confident that you will get good results. Mind you, in the past, those numbers come from continuing to work with my clients (on a sliding scale I had to) and testing and tweaking but I am certainly open to any work I can get at the moment. Now, I cannot think of any more excuses for failure LOL but seriously, if you have some projects that you want to test it out on, I am more than happy to work with you. In the meantime, I have a request up for a critique of my newest sales letter so you may want to look at that to find out what you think ... mind you that was a two-hour job and not for a paying client so it may not be a great example. Just my two cents |
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Just send me the best representation of your best online sales letter work.
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If you offer peanuts you get a monkey. On the other hand you could try the Philippines or India, US peanuts would be like coconuts for those two countries.
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This software is not going to sell anything for you. Trust me on this. You'd be wasting another $97. | |
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To my fellow copywriters... This thread (and the dozens just like it) has really begun to tire me out. So... I have a new tack. Maybe this will stop these threads from cropping up.. The original question was: Is it possible to find "affordable" Sales Letter Writers? My new answer is "no... it's not. Bye now." Maybe THAT should be a sticky. |
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Yes. You are right. We copywriters are here basically to help each other learn, share our experiences and grow in our craft... at least, those are my reasons for participating. I am NOT here to provide cheap labor to demanding gimme-gimmie people. That is rude and demeaning. Non-copywriters don't understand how close our craft is to writing poetry. Why? Because when we succeed in producing effective copy, the wordings and tone are so familiar, so natural that when you read it, you think: Jeez, that's exactly how I think. I could write that in my sleep! NOT! It's like watching any expert at work. They are sooo skilled in their craft that they make it look easy. Take an electrician replacing a light fixture. He doesn't even turn off the electricity; just unscrews the old one, wires in the new then screws it in. No problem, right? Only took like 15 mins, tops. But you bet-ter darn sight cut off that power before YOU try replacing a light fixture! And I suspect it'd take you a whole lot longer to get it done. Not to mention the likelihood of blowing a fuse when you try it out, lol. So we do deserve respect for our expertise. Visitors to this forum need to recognize this! Thanks, Dot |
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Yes, it is. Though more difficult to find. I have a GREAT writer that does salesletters for under $300. Though of course, then you have to test and tweak.
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Hi After reading this thread, I don't believe a good sale copy can be found for cheap. The objective is sales not pages. I know if the requirements to create a sales page and have done a few but when I compare mine to great copy writers, mine is crap and I now only use copy writers. The sales from the sales page is the most important aspect of your product. No matter how good your product is, if you have a crap sales page, you will not sell much. It is not about the page, it is about the emotional and psychological triggers. Having been working/partnering with a great if not awesome copy writer who has posted to this thread, I am extremely impressed. This is the difference between a successful launch and just putting something up on the internet. Yes, there are those few gems who are good and may charge less than $1,000 but as people have said you get what you pay for. Remember one of the most successful ways to launch a product is via JVs and trust me if your sales copy is not up to scratch then you won't get many JVs promoting your product nor affiliates via Clickbank. As for those software applications that create sales pages for you, I have tried a few as well as sales page templates and although they create and format the sales pages correctly they do not target those sales triggers. I find these apps a complete waste of time. Regards Mark |
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Well, people have offered you some good advice, which you've chosen to ignore. With copy, like anything else in life, you get what you pay for. The truth is, it's pretty obvious from your posts you have no idea what you're doing, or what good copy even looks like. You are going to waste $200 on some copy-whore who probably can't even sell you on the value of their own services. Think about that. A copywriter is, in essence, a salesperson who uses the printed word to persuade prospects to part with their money. The people who eagerly messaged you looking for a measly $200 job suck so badly at selling that they can't even negotiate a good paycheck for themselves. And you're going to hire them to write the sales letter for your product? Hell, if they can't even sell themselves into a living wage...do you honestly think they can sell ANYTHING? Look, save yourself some money and a lot of headaches. Go to Amazon.com. Buy the following books, read them carefully, and write your own copy. You will get better results than the $200 streetwalkers and learn something useful at the same time. The list: Tested Advertising Methods by John Caples How to Write a Good Advertisement by Vic Schwab The Ultimate Sales Letter by Dan Kennedy The Adweek Copywriting Handbook by Joe Sugarnan Hypnotic Marketing by Joe Vitale My Life in Advertising/Scientific Advertising by Claude Hopkins and... The Robert Collier Letter Book The three "Must read" books are the ones by Hopkins, Caples, Schwab, and the Collier book. The rest are very, very good but not as important as those four. Read them thoroughly and then apply what you learned. The Caples book alone will make you a better copywriter than anyone who will drop their drawers for $200. | |
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Awesome, awesome post Dot! The analogy to poetry is a great one--my concentrations in college were fiction writing and poetry, and copywriting is very similar in the absolute precision required--complete emotional connection with no wasted words. Not an easy task. I remember going on 24 hour Kerouac-esque writing binges, followed by 24 hours of sleeping and occasioanlly crawling out of bed to eat. Writing, good writing, is exhausting. I've spent 6 weeks living and training with professional fighters in the jungles of Thailand and that's the ONLY thing that has ever come close to the level of exhaustion those writing binges inflicted on me. Expecting someone to kill themselves cranking out a killer sales letter for peanuts IS insulting, and demeaning...and the copywriters who accept those fees should be ashamed of themselves. Not for being so cheap, but for taking someone's money and delivering a crappy product. Total lack of integrity IMO. | |
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Nice - This thread got Sticky, I've updated the main thread a bit. Hope it all helps. Cheers, Roshan |
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Anyone reading this who is in the market for an "affordable" copywriter beware. I used WF to hire someone to write me some "affordable" copy ($125) and it was complete and utter garbage. The writer explained to me that this was cheap but they would accept as they had the time and blah blah blah. Anyway I got my money back from them and deleted the copy from my hard drive as it just hurt my eyes to read it. Lesson learned - I now KNOW I need to spend some real money if I want to get great copy from a pro who will work with me. I know a lot of copywriters have been on this thread explaining this point but I just wanted to give a customers perspective on it. Also - the hackwork of a sales copy in my link below is my own after trolling other sales pages and putting my terrible talent to work (though it converts pretty well)/ |
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This is very true. Sales letters are not cheap. The lowest price you can probably find is about $300. If you go any less than that you may not get the results you need. You can also learn to write sales copy on your own. You can do it! Have you ever check out Wealthy Affiliate? I just signed up and I am learning how to write sales copy. I have worked as a freelance writer for the past 2 years, writing for magazines, and my own web sites, but now its time for me to get serious about marketing. Send me a message for more info.
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Hello my friend! Great post. A good copywriter at an affordable price is hard to find but you know that I think they should be paid the big bucks. Its not easy! I get frustrated when I see people trying to offer writers $5 for a unique article with keywords added. I mainly write for Demand Studios and small magazines, but I am trying to learn sales copywriting. I have so much to learn because my writing style is not very "sales" orientated. However, I can always learn. I am looking for the right training course. What course are you taking? I want to learn about grant proposal writing and how to write sales copy.
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The problem you could run into is with projects that take you far more than 4 hours to complete. For example, I'm working on a salesletter now for a very comprehensive non-IM product. I have about 50 hours in so far and I'm not finished yet. That's reviewing every part of the product... research... writing... editing... polishing the copy... editing some more... polishing some more before turning it over to the client. If I were to have charged this client a $100, I'd be making less than $2 per hour or about 1/3 of minimum wage in the U.S. As I said in an earlier post, the downside to doing low-priced copywriting is you need to turn out a higher volume of work each month to make a living wage (whatever that amount is for you). The higher the workload, the higher the likelihood of suffering burnout or an injury like carpal tunnel syndrome. Ultimately it comes down to you charging what you feel your time and expertise are worth to your clients. The market will then confirm you are indeed worth what you're asking. Best of luck, Mike | |
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You see Mark... Copywriting is supposed to make the sale. It's not supposed to fill the page... not supposed to get optimization... it's not supposed to make the client's wife happy. It's supposed to jam money into the client's pocket. Those who can do that are worth their weight in gold. Those who can't... are worth nothing. What you have in this thread are people who are at some level between the two. And most charge accordingly. Sure... there are some vastly underpriced copywriters here. Guys who are worth many more times than they charge. I know this for a fact because I have students of mine who post on the WF. Some are mid to high 4 figure copywriters charging low 4 figures... Others are 5 figure copywriters charging high 4 figures. Neither will be for long but since it's early in their careers they can be had cheap. Are there any unpolished gems in the mix who are worth thousands but charge hundreds? Maybe... who knows? There might be a couple. But should a marketer (especially one who is low on funds) hang his success or failure on an unproven entity? Let's say I need new tires on my car. I could buy a trusted Goodyear tire for a couple hundred bucks each... or I could even buy some unknown... untested chinese brand for $25 each. Which tires do I trust to carry around my infant nephew and niece? Those chi-tires might be great... but probably not. Still they MIGHT be. But am I willing to take that chance? Even if I'm flat broke with only $25 in my pocket I would buy a used tire from a company with a track record before considering the chi-tire. For many marketers their business is their baby... their infant... So... sure... absolutely there are great copywriters working cheap. I've just never seen anyone pay a couple hundred dollars for a sales letter and come away from the enterprise with a profit. So... pay maybe 1000 more and make a few grand... Or pay a hundred bucks and more often than not kiss that hundred goodbye... plus kiss the money you spent on traffic goodbye... and kiss your time goodbye... Which one was really the expensive one? And let me repeat one more time... NOT EVERY CHEAP COPYWRITER SUCKS! But finding one you can successfully trust your livelihood to... that's often impossible. | ||||
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All things being equal, the more you charge, the better client you're going to get. Just sayin'... I'm a bit puzzlied by your righteous indignation here. You seem to want to prove that you're an exception, not the rule. Fine, let's agree that you are... so what? What does that mean? How many letters do you intend to write for $100. Presumably, as few as possible until you can command higher fees, right? DING! Wait a minute... why should anyone ever pay you a penny over $100 for your copy? Because it's BETTER, right? Because you're PROVEN, right? Right... and THAT is why more experienced copywriters bag on cheap hacks. But more importantly, how did this become about YOU anyway? You're up in arms because you've elected to charge too little or don't have the experience yet to charge more? I must be missing something. The OP got a nice stiff rogering from his $200 copywriter adventure and you're pissed because we said "we told ya so.."? Surely we can agree that there are far more under-qualified $100 copywriters than good ones, yes? If so, then surely you can see the sanity in expressing that thought in a Copywriting Forum, yes? Brian | |
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No one should make undertone comments about anyone. You're right about this. What you're wrong about is that anyone was actually making undertone comments. What I said was the entire tone... over, under... middle... bass and treble... And it wasn't that any individual writer sucks. It was all about finding a good writer and how hard it is to do that when you have no money to spend. You wanted to stifle that message looks to me like you're only looking out for one person. On the other hand I'm also looking out for the beginning marketers too. The ones who might be tempted to buy cheap copy expecting "it'll be fine for now." I hear it all the time... and all the time those people are unhappy. Not every buyer of course. But every buyer I've spoken to. Hiring a great copywriter who makes a lot of money isn't any guarantee the project is going to work. But it usually gives you a much better shot. Hiring a brand new, unproven, green, hungry but not fully informed copywriter does not always guarantee a project will die. Neither of those things are assured. They're just more likely. | |||||||||||
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Wordpro, Chill. There are definitely great copywriters who start out low. Mike Humphreys wrote his first letter for $300 or so, I think, as did Bruce Wedding (I remember reading this somewhere... correct me if I'm wrong guys!). Vin wrote his first paid letter for $500. But they're the exception. For every one of them, there's about a thousand hack writers who charge next to nothing and put out crappy work... again, and again, and again... Think of it like the lottery. Sure, if you buy a ticket, you might win that ten million bucks... but you have a snowball's chance in hell. Let me tell you something... writing a good letter takes a lot of time. I have never met a good copywriter who can say otherwise. Writing a letter that LOOKS, to the untrained eye (which is why you get a copywriter in the first place, usually) that it will work is easy. Actually writing one that DOES convert is far, far harder. To write a good letter, you have to study the market til you know them inside out. Analyze the competition. Intimately aquaint yourself with the client's product. Derive a USP. Understand WHAT you're going to say in the letter... So, right there, that's probably at least 20 hours worth of work before you start writing. If you charge $100/letter, that's $5/hr... not exactly worth it when you can make more at Maccas. Now, understand that I have been a $100 writer... so I know what I'm talking about. When I started out, I did 4 letters for $97/piece... and you know what? Those letters took me about 20 hours each. They were good... not amazing, but good, and from what I hear, the clients who actually used them made some okay money out of them. So the next two letters I wrote were at $500... and they were better... and took 25 hours each. So now I'm making an okay wage... but still not a great one... considering the insane amount of work that I put into them (and the insane amount of money they have the capacity to generate). Then I started working with Vin... and my letters are now taking even longer to write... but they're getting pretty good. And I now charge about $3 000 a letter... and that's increasing every letter. So it's taken me about 10 letters, I think, to go from $100/letter to $3 000/letter... and people who are smarter than I am don't start at $100. Can you see now why it is next to impossible to get a good writer for $100? Here's the other side of the coin... I get a much better class of client. Clients actually USE the letters I write for them... generate traffic, and get solid results... which I can then use to get more clients... So, whilst I'm not down on all low-fee copywriters... having been one myself, if only briefly (although some would probably still consider me a low-fee copywriter)... I do understand that most of them can't write worth a cup of cold water. Now, since you brought it up, let's look at your 4-hour letter at Wordpress Squeeze Pages: Wordpress Squeeze Page Generator :Wordpress Squeeze Pages Now, by skimming this letter real quick I can see some major problems. Your headline's too long. You are light on benefits and emotional punch. The order of your copy's "parts" doesn't really flow well, your bullets are non-existent (nobody really cares about a "feature", only what it will do for them)... and so on. Now, here's the funny thing... I bet if you spent another twenty hours on that letter, or whatever... you could make it absolutely killer. There are some really strong points that you've hinted at... and if you had a mentor they would show this up for you. But as it stands, it's pretty weak. And, as Mike said, it's one of the better $100 letters I've seen. Now, I'm not trying to be a dick for the sake of it. It's clear you have an excellent grip on the English language (better than myself for certain, and probably many others)... and you've obviously at least studied some copywriting. If you keep writing, I think you could be an amazing copywriter. High fees come with confidence, and confidence comes with proven results... and proven results comes with writing a lot of good letters. So until you can show me someone who has written more than a few low priced letters who consistently hits it "out of the park"... your comments are just misleading. They're a nice thought, sure, but they ain't reality. -Dan |
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Mark, It's great to know that you've actually taken our advice on board. Most people just ignore what you have to say... even had you honesty and truly read it, thought about it, and discarded it, I would have been happy. It takes balls to say "I was wrong" or even "I wasn't 100% right"... and I wish more people around had the wisdom and courage you do. By the way, a quick tip from a fellow copywriter... use shorter sentences. Your whole paragraphs are one big sentence... split them up and use elipses (...) instead of commas wherever possible. Just a tip I've picked up from a far better writer than myself. -Dan |
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It's all good, Mark. Now go make some money!
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| Fingers of Fury War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami, Florida, USA.
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| Cool Aussie Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Perth, Western Australia
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Great thread eveyone. :-) I have copywriting issues too. I couldn't afford to hire anyone so took an option to have a consultation phonecall with a good copywriter. Then I spent four days getting my head into the right space and wrote a sales letter that doesn't sell. Apparently my letter is 1000 times better than my first but I really don't like writing. There were a ton of things that I would rather have spent four days working on. I am good at back end creating products but can't seem to get the front end sales right. I was thinking about joint venturing with a copywriter but don't know whether that is a more viable option to go with rather than paying someone. What do you guys think? I am concerned that I am going to have someone come to me and say hey yeah I am good, i would like to joint venture with you, and then turn out to be not too good. What kind of questions or expectations should I have for someone to prove themselves? |
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It's incredible how much I have learned in this single thread. Thank you all.
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On the contrary... If a copywriter is really good... and if he has hung already long enough to know the ins and outs of this business... YOU will have a hard time convincing HIM that you're serious about making the project a success. More often than not, what happens is that the copywriter spends 3 weeks to a month writing, editing, polishing the copy. And then the product creator... he suddenly loses interest in the product or sees that it's not turning out like he thought it would... and simply stops promoting it. It's THAT easy for the product creator to give up when he hasn't invested much money in the product. But when you look at it from the copywriter's viewpoint, he has spent a whole month writing copy for the product... and what did he make eventually? Nothing! So as far as I know, unless you know a copywriter really well PERSONALLY... and he knows for the fact that you're a serious marketer... you will have a VERY hard time convincing a good copywriter to JV with you. Hope this helps, Dean Dhuli. | |
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| Cool Aussie Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Perth, Western Australia
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Wow, thanks Dean. My problem is that I don't lose interest and keep on persisting. Bad copy and all. So what I am hearing is that there are three phases. The product creation. The copywriting. The promotion. Collating all of those into an overall business structure is an issue too. So it seems I will need to joint venture with more than one person, locally, who knows and trusts me, to succeed. The only way forward that I can see is to fill in the gaps of what I don't have with people that do have what I need. But you are right. How do I get to know these people and have them understand how persistent I am. I don't see the point of so much persistence if it is not targeted within a proper framework that is going to give a profitable outcome. mmm, how can I make it happen, i wonder... |
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How can you make it happen? I don't know. Maybe if you're introduced to the copywriter by a mutual friend who knows you and your capabilities really well. That's the only way I can think of because getting a complete stranger to trust you cannot and will not happen overnight. It takes time to build a relationship. If you go to an established copywriter and say "you write copy for me and I'll pay you 50% of the profits", his reaction will be like "yeah, right!" Don't take it that he's being arrogant or anything. You get this kind of response because he probably got burnt on similar deals before. I personally have. Did a couple of JV deals when I was starting out and never got paid a single penny for the copy. Plus, as if to add salt to the wound, the copywriter eventually gets accused of writing copy that's worthless and ineffective. Do they really need that? And then... Even if you get the copy free, you'll still need money for PPC, graphics, buying affiliate software, etc. Unless your product is in the IM niche, you'll also not have 300 affiliates with huge lists promoting it right off the bat. So these are also some of the things you need to consider. Established copywriters won't agree to JVs for exactly this reason -- most newbies don't know how to market the product even if you give them the best copy in the world. However, if you remove your fixation for a good copywriter... settle for a decent one (somebody who's just starting out probably)... and also get a traffic expert with moderate expertise on board, there's no reason why you can't do well as a team. Take care, Dean | |
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| Cool Aussie Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Perth, Western Australia
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Thanks Dean, I am in a business marketing group here in Australia so I have already got good relationships. Its another month before we meet up. At least I have more of an idea about the 'reality' of the situation. Thanks :-) |
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Seems to me, if you can write good copy for yourself, Killer-ads that you know are effective, why shouldn't you make a few extra bucks writing copy for other people? Someone described Copywriters as 'Bottom-Feeders'.. For me, if client and provider are both happy, what's wrong with that? And to think about it., who made the most money in the 1849 Gold Rush? The guys who sold shovels and pans, that's who. Now they were bottom feeders, but they didn't get their hands quite so dirty! jj |
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Interesting discussion, I totally underdstand you get what you pay for with sales copy. But how much do your really need to spend on copy for a 25 to 40 dollar ebook if your serious and want results? | |
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| Godfather Of Persuasion War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Los Angeles - Tampa - Raleigh
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I don't mean, "Hey I sold 50 ebooks!" kinda results. I mean, "Honey... my ebook is buying you a new car" kinda results. If you're looking for that, I always recommend my students. When it goes past that... When you're hoping to make high 5, 6 or even 7 figures... that's when you really should spend low 5 figures to get it. | |
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| The Cake Is A Lie War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Mackay, QLD, Australia
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Selling an ebook is harder than you think. You're selling an intangible product to (often, but not always) computer challenged folks who think the internet is a scam-fest and everyone's out to get you. Now, as Vin said, the results you want will be dependent on the level of copywriter you hire... and there's no rule you have to spend $10 000 or whatever right off the bat. You could always re-invest that later. But to get a business with any kind of momentum you're probably looking at a few thousand. At that figure, you know the copywriter values their time, which means they are (hopefully) good at what they do... hell, they convinced you to part with three grand didn't they? Remember, you are building a BUSINESS here. Offline guys have to buy a storefront, inventory, pay bills, etc etc. Online, you can cut out a lot of those costs... but not all of them. It's still a business, and businesses require investment... usually in both time AND money. -Dan | |
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Now imagine that you get a copywriter to triple your response rate. Now you're making 75 to 120 thousand dollars. So why wouldn't you pay $10,000 for that copywriter? You're making five to eight times your investment back. Copywriting is like software development: good design adds value faster than it adds cost. | |
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Freaking funny, but very true... js | |
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It depends. How many 25 to 40-dollar ebooks do you seriously want to sell? | |
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I am an up and comer and i rewrote a squeeze page for a lady who tried to do it herself. I charged her $200 (thinking maybe that was too high at first) and I did my research and cranked it out in about two days. I literally increased her sign up rate by %600 if you can believe it. I'm trying to get my name out there and do cheap jobs for people but I'm not sure how to go about it at this point. this thread is very helpful
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I think so far I've invested $4k - $5k training myself to learn copywriting. Notice I said "invest'? That's what you're paying for when you hire a copywriter. Someone who is providing a tool to help you get a ROI of the letter. You might consider going to AWAI (American Writers and Artist's Institute) for a great course. It was one of the best investments of my professional copywriting career. Susan |
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I think it's more about the sales letter writer and less about the price. You can find people who are charging WAY TOO MUCH for boring, crappy copy... and you can find people who are charging $200 for copy that is powerful and effective. Some copywriters use templates, they follow a set pattern and they don't take the time to create original hooks that grab reader's attention... and these copywriters aren't worth any amount of money. But if you can find a copywriter who will take the time to get into the mind of your buyer and identify the CORE reason for buying... then they are worth any fee. I think the key to finding a good copywriter for a low proce is to find someone who is working to build their business up and willing to work for less money. |
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No copywriter who has "built their business up" and is "not willing to work for less money" will work for a low fee | |
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My question is "Can you afford not to?" By that I mean you will get more concersions. However if you cannot afford a couple of thousand for your sales letter write your own and save your profits if there are any ot get a sales letter with a better conversion rate! La dominatrix | |
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For $97 bucks you should buy a salesletter software - from Marlon Sanders or Mark Hendricks and just follow the step-by-step instructions. I don't outsource my salescopy -as you need to be in touch to really nail it. However, paying someone to make it better is another thing... It pays to know how to do the bones of it yourself, IMO |
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