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Fingers of Fury
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Here's a novel idea, since his last headlines are "working great" for you... How about you HIRE Chris? Worried that you can't afford him? Make him an offer! The worst that can happen is he can't do it and says, "Sorry, but no thanks..." On the other hand, you might gain a new business partner with the marketing skill you need to succeed. At least bring something back to the table for the guy besides an empty plate asking for seconds... Sheesh. Best, Brian | |
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TheHypnoticCopywriter.com
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Hey Brian,
Thanks for the post. I'll gladly have someone else pimping my services ![]() If you're worried about cost, I am open to percentage deals. Just depends on the project, the owner, and a million other things. PM me if you want info. My internet's been down for the past few days, so I've got a lot of catching up to do. I'll try to find some time to work on some of these headlines. |
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TheHypnoticCopywriter.com
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Does Planning Your Wedding Leave You With A Headache? How To Quickly & Easily Plan Your Wedding! | |
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But I'm not sure if that fits with the whole page Welcome to The Bible of the Bride | Free Yourself from Wedding Jitters Let me know what you think. | |
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Idiotic Marketer
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Its a very good job being done dude. soon i would like to come up with my idea. I need your help.
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"Property Rental Expert reveals easy to apply 'house for rent' secrets guaranteed to help rent your property FAST...and with competition-killing confidence!"
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Thanks for helping people with your generous offer. Would you please help me with following heading. Thanks
"Do You Want a Digital Product Delivery System that Fully Automates & Protects Sales and Downloads for Google and PayPal Transactions?" |
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TheHypnoticCopywriter.com
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Now Introducing... The Easiest Way To Deliver Digital Products While Keeping The Download Link Secure! Discover How To Effortlessly Protect, Automate, and Deliver All Your Digital Products! These should get you off to a good start. Take the time to analyze what's important to your customers, then write a headline that focus's on that. | |
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TheHypnoticCopywriter.com
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Having Trouble Renting Our Your Home? Rent Your Home The Easy Way With These Expert's House Rental Secrets! | |
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Hello Chris,
Thanks for helping me out with the headline. Would you be able to help me out with my sales copy found in my signature website? I have a small budget, not sure how much I will be able to pay. But please take a look and PM me if you could. Thanks |
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Are you a Kishore Kumar fan? Find Karaokes, Songs, Lyrics of Kishore kumar music. Write a blog, request a song, submit a song. Have fun.
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Hello Chris,
Would you help me out on this please, Sub headlines on top: Tired of commuting to work everyday, boring daily routine, meeting deadline and attending endless meeting Lead capture here: "Who Else Wants A Proven System To Help You Quit Your Day Job For Good?" my site is at moneynsense Thanks |
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TheHypnoticCopywriter.com
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For starters...
There's a lot of work to be done, but you obviously have a knack for writing, so you'll get it where it needs to be. You may just need someone to show you the way. | |
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Hi Chris,
Really appreciate your advise, I'll work on page again. And thank you. cheers
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Hi can you suggest something to replace this
"Getting Nowhere With Your eBay Business? Discover How Simple Changes And The Right Tools Can Be The Difference Between Success and Failure"
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hiya- if this offer is still open:
"The Ultimate Lazy Man's Backlink Machine - How To Get 1488 Backlinks In 180 Days, With Hardly Lifting a Finger" Many thanks |
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~* Warrior Fabulous *~
Join Date: Jun 2008
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Oh, what fun! I LOVE posts like this....!!! How 'bout this one:
You're About to Learn The Secrets Of Harnessing Solar and Wind Energy That Most People Will Never Know! |
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Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy, and good with ketchup.
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Spying on Gurus.... :)
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Hey Chris
You are doing a great job here, helping out or free. Can I request you to take a look at my squeeze page and critique its headline. its located it Successful Gurus or the headline is as follows "Free Video uncovers the ultra secret strategy that helped Gurus make Millions Last Year..." Thanks in advance Chris Deepak |
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