Please critique my squeeze page

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Hello warriors i am looking to increase my conversions for my squeeze page, can you guys critique the copy on my squeeze page. Tell me is it compelling enough or not. Please be honest i can take it. Thanks

See it here: Easy Ways To Make Money
#critique #page #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author GregBrooks
    The whole page is pretty vague. It essentially says "give me your email address and I'll give you some report."

    What is the report, why is it so effective, what makes it worth $97?
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    • Profile picture of the author Chriswrighto
      To me it's shouting...

      SCAM!!!!

      ...and you're not even selling anything.

      "Discover An Easy Proven Way
      Of Making Money Online Fast"

      Nearly everyone suspects a scam when easy, proven, money and fast are in the same sentence.

      You need to back this up... (ideally get rid of it.)

      And add some specifics about what people will learn in the report to justify it's $97 value.
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      Wealthcopywriter.com :)

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  • Profile picture of the author JohnRussell
    The only thing that page is squeezing is a hosting fee...
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  • Profile picture of the author kpmedia
    I never bother reading things that claim to be 'easy" or "fast" when money is involved.
    That only appeals to lazy morons, to be frank.
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  • Profile picture of the author jamesclouser
    I agree with Chris & Greg.

    You have to answer the question: "What's in it for me?"
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