quick headline help needed please!

Mubarak Waseem · 06-10-2009, 02:53 PM

Hey Warriors...

I need a bit of help with my headline for my latest product which I am offering to warriors...

Without wanting to advertise my WSO, it is a top-quality top-dollar product about the recession, which buyers get plr to, and they can sell it to their list...

My headline ATM is weak:

UNIQUE Recession PLR-Skip Product Creation and Sell this top Dollar product to your list NOW!

It sucks - I know.

Any suggestions about how I could improve it? It needs to meet WSO headline guidlines (90 or so characters)

Any help is greatly appreciated!

Mubarak

Mubarak Waseem · 06-10-2009, 02:56 PM

I have come up with:

RECESSION SURVIVAL SECRETS – YOU NEED THIS TO THRIVE IN THE RECESSION – NOW WITH PLR!

David Wilding · 06-14-2009, 09:34 AM

What Recession? Report(whatever) w/PLR Reveals Technique to Sidestep the Whole Mess.

procopywriter · 06-14-2009, 10:37 AM

A great headline comes from knowing the prospect, knowing the market (competitive landscape), and knowing the product. You'll get some ideas and suggestions here, but nothing that's going to "knock the ball out of the park."

Provide a bit more information about the product and who it's for, and you may get some decent suggestions off the top of our heads.

Aaron

06-10-2009, 02:53 PM	#1
Mubarak Waseem TheMinisiteKid.com War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Hiding Behind your Monitor Posts: 1,436 Thanks: 254 Thanked 102 Times in 77 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	quick headline help needed please! Hey Warriors... I need a bit of help with my headline for my latest product which I am offering to warriors... Without wanting to advertise my WSO, it is a top-quality top-dollar product about the recession, which buyers get plr to, and they can sell it to their list... My headline ATM is weak: UNIQUE Recession PLR-Skip Product Creation and Sell this top Dollar product to your list NOW! It sucks - I know. Any suggestions about how I could improve it? It needs to meet WSO headline guidlines (90 or so characters) Any help is greatly appreciated! Mubarak
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06-10-2009, 02:56 PM	#2
Mubarak Waseem TheMinisiteKid.com War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Hiding Behind your Monitor Posts: 1,436 Thanks: 254 Thanked 102 Times in 77 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: quick headline help needed please! I have come up with: RECESSION SURVIVAL SECRETS – YOU NEED THIS TO THRIVE IN THE RECESSION – NOW WITH PLR!
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06-14-2009, 09:34 AM	#3
David Wilding HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: , , USA. Posts: 298 Thanks: 25 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: quick headline help needed please! What Recession? Report(whatever) w/PLR Reveals Technique to Sidestep the Whole Mess.
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06-14-2009, 10:37 AM	#4
procopywriter Joshua Aaron Stanley Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Redondo Beach, CA Posts: 137 Thanks: 1 Thanked 34 Times in 30 Posts Social Networking	Re: quick headline help needed please! A great headline comes from knowing the prospect, knowing the market (competitive landscape), and knowing the product. You'll get some ideas and suggestions here, but nothing that's going to "knock the ball out of the park." Provide a bit more information about the product and who it's for, and you may get some decent suggestions off the top of our heads. Aaron
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