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06-16-2009, 11:37 PM
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|  Please help me a bit with my sales page
Hello guys, Since you guys are the best in the marking I need some of your help. I just bought a website from my brother and I think there's missing something. Please tell me what to add.delete .... http://www.cpamoola.com thanks a lot !  |
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06-16-2009, 11:57 PM
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| Godfather Of Persuasion War Room Member  Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Los Angeles - Tampa - Raleigh
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| Re: Please help me a bit with my sales page
First thing to do... Delete your brother from your list of business people you trust. Quote:
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06-17-2009, 12:02 AM
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I don't trust him much. don't worry . I bought it from it because I really liked the ebook and because he needed money. but why ? haha |
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06-17-2009, 12:08 AM
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| Re: Please help me a bit with my sales page
Get rid of the clickbank man with the money looks tacky
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06-17-2009, 12:15 AM
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06-17-2009, 12:28 AM
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| Re: Please help me a bit with my sales page
correction I mean Clipart Man - sorry have clickbank on my mind today!
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06-17-2009, 05:59 AM
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| Re: Please help me a bit with my sales page
Justin... This page needs a lot of work before it converts even remotely well. Read some good books on copy, then spend a fortnight re-writing it. Yes, it needs that much work. Also, get rid of the huge pic of the guy with the moneybag. That's one of the most valuable areas of the page, and you're wasting it on clipart. Good luck. -David Raybould |
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06-17-2009, 07:38 AM
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| Re: Please help me a bit with my sales page
If your product isn't totally worthless it should be priced higher than it is by at least 300%, probably more - and real sales copy (which this isn't) showing the value. This isn't an effective sales page by a long shot and believe me, the $5 price will have a lot of people assuming your product is crap, even if you did have rockin' copy. |
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