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Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
Tip #2 Today's tip is about headlines. One of the most talked-about subjects in all of copywriting. I'll make it easy. How many times have you searched on Google for ... [read more]
I've now been a freelance copywriter for the last 11 years. If you're a brand-new copywriter, I'm going to try to give you a tiny peek at the art and ... [read more]
I see this question a lot. It's the wrong question. The real question is... How do I find good copywriting clients? That distinction matters. A lot. Every time I'm looking ... [read more]
So I decided I'll make this whole thing go beyond 3 tips. Are some thinking I'm going too far? Probably yes. Will I continue? Again probably yes. To recap: You're ... [read more]
Please see the following guides to our community: Warrior Forum Rules & Etiquette for Posting WSO Marketplace Rules List of the best all in one, knowledge compendium threads You are ... [read more]
Im re-reading Breakthrough Advertising. It's funny how it all went into one ear and out the other the first time I read it a couple years ago. It's really a ... [read more]
Can someone please tell me what tools are being used to make headlines like the ones found here Plan My Baby - Baby Gender Selection - Prince or Princess? - ... [read more]
Hello all, I have a hair care product that I'm promoting via Google AdWords. It's been up for a few days and no sales yet, although it's very new and ... [read more]
It gnawed on me. "Why was the math upside down." "What was the copywriter thinking" To figure it out, the reader has to do some work. And if they are ... [read more]
Alright! Thanks for the help guys! Had plenty of suggestions to change quite a bit last time. Lets go for round 2! Check it out here: http://www.karsononline.com/get-wp-optins/ Also, if you ... [read more]
Hi all, Now, I do not profess to knowing all about copywriting - one of the reasons I decided not to offer it as a service yet - but I ... [read more]
Joe Sugarman refers to a JS&A Bally Fireball ad in Chapter 16 of the Adweek Copywriting Handbook. I wanted to see the whole thing so here it is: http://i.imgur.com/3aYOM.png
I have built a salespage for a product that I have worked on with my coach and meditation teacher. I have uploaded an image of the salespage to my site, ... [read more]
Something I find a lot of copywrites suffer from - especially more experienced ones - is something I call 'over copyfidence'. What is it? Well, for me it's when you ... [read more]
The answer to this one question, more than anything else, will determine how many zeros you have in your bank or PayPal account. You can study the greats, hand-write sales ... [read more]
Here it is: h**p://YourFirst1000DollarOnline.info So far the page has between 35 and 40 percent of convertion rates. I plan to improve it until at least 50 percent. Any input you ... [read more]
A sub-headline featured in my sales letter says this: "How foolish would you feel if... you spent 1000s on advertising each month... ... and nothing on the rich vein of ... [read more]
I'm not an expert copywriter and so i'm reaching out for assistance from the copywriting pros. What do you think of this page? Shortzilla (dot) com Does it grab your ... [read more]
Hi guys and gals, I have been studying Copywriting for a few weeks now, and was laying in bed last when a couple of questions popped in my mind. I ... [read more]
Okay, so anyone who has studied buying psychology knows the value of testimonials: they create social proof, and show that people are getting value out of the product. I like ... [read more]
So when writing your sales pages. Do you also pay any attention to keywords? I mean writing a sales page is great.. but if you're not getting any visitors or ... [read more]
Alright... Took into account what everyone has been saying and made a new set this 3rd time around. and thank you to everyone that has helped so far! Alright... Been ... [read more]
Like everyone in this forum (I'm assuming), I watch and read a lot of sales pitches. I recently saw one that I think is pretty awesome, thought I'd share and ... [read more]
Hey folks, I was scouring through Gary Halbert's letters a few days ago. After about 20 minutes or so, I chanced upon his letter that addressed wannabe copywriters. Basically he ... [read more]
Hey guys First off, I've never written a sales copy before but I've been through enough to know what sounds good to me and what doesn't I also studied a ... [read more]
Hey guys, Just kidding about the cookies... But I just wrote my first full sales letter and I'm wanting to get some feedback. Have a look ==> Become an Article ... [read more]
I am looking for a good copywriter that can create me a page that converts. Must be able to help me with: DESPERATE PROBLEM: UNIQUE PROMISE: OVERWHELMING PROOF: IRRESISTIBLE OFFER: ... [read more]
Here's my latest attempt. (Selling a 'done-for-you' newsletter writing service to financial advisors who generally have a newsletter but seldom send it out, it's boring, and gets no response.) +++ ... [read more]
People Hate Email That Names Them Looking at my last 20 broadcast messages, it doesn't seem to me that putting {!firstname_fix} in the subject has any real effect either way. ... [read more]
is it okay to create two sales pages and sell the same product but target different customers?
I have been doing my own article writing for the past 3 years but haven't done much real copy writing. I didn't put to much into it because I knew ... [read more]
Hey there W. Forumers, Now, I don't often like asking for advice on this forum because I've noticed everyone and their dog seems to give advice here...some good and some ... [read more]
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I wanna say right off the bat that I'm looking for some help with a thread which I have here on the WF ... I'm not sure if this is ... [read more]
Small improvements in your copy can increase its effectiveness. Take a look at these 5. 1. Do not avoid the hard work. ''Write at least 20 to 25 good headlines,'' ... [read more]
Alot of great salesmen and copywriters seem to contradict each other on whether enthusiasm helps to sell or not. Some claim that enthusiasm kills sales. Some say it explodes your ... [read more]
I'm on a break, so I'm having a rant. I see so many comments on here that actually make me cringe. This is a copywriting forum. A lot of people ... [read more]
"This opportunity doesn't start with me asking you for money." Just got an email this morning. That's the first line on the sales page. And I've seen quite a few ... [read more]
I have a client asking me about monthly retainer fees. Are any of you guys on monthly retainers? If so, how do you structure them? eg. The client gets x ... [read more]
Well it's hidden to me. Can u guys brutally critique my sales copy? My Baby Diaper Cake And should I add a vid? Thanks
If you've ever seriously studied music, you know what a master class is. If you don't, here is an excellent description from Wikipedia: In a master class, all the students ... [read more]
Hi everyone, I've decided to write another sales letter and open to some opinions, the good the bad and the ugly. I've posted before with a sales letter and many ... [read more]
Hey guys Looking to get your thoughts and suggestions on my squeeze page. I intend on split testing too, so if you have any suggestions on what you think I ... [read more]
So my 2 year old son Evan, who had been constipated for 2 days, poops the biggest crap I've seen. I mean, the diaper is overflowing with crap. It's smelly, ... [read more]
A good article that brings copywriting down to the "mere mortal" level and helps you get a handle on it. Whether you're a hip hop fan ...or not. Read Here!
Does anyone know of the best resouce for sales letter graphics. Bullets - order nows - money backs and other variours things would be great. Also for the sub headings ... [read more]
Have a listen to this. Paddy McAloon - I Trawl The Megahertz (Edit) -... In case it doesn’t play. It’s an edited version of Paddy McAloons’s album track “I Trawl ... [read more]
Getting people's trust is key to getting decent copywriting jobs. Your clients have to be absolutely certain that their investment in you will bring the returns they want and more. ... [read more]
Hi, As you can see I'm a bit new on this topic. I have researched for 2 full days now on this forum on how to write a reasonable copy. ... [read more]
Hi, I'm really struggling to find many copywriters for sales pages. Can anyone suggest me some? I have a budget up to $200 Thanks!
MP45 dot COM (I don't have enough posts to link it...sorry!) We created a fitness based ebook focusing on a 45 day fitness plan. Our sales aren't converting as much ... [read more]
I'm looking for something up to date from the past year or two that teaches how to use SRDS online, how to roll out mass mailings in 2012, and that ... [read more]
Hi guys! I'm putting together my very first WSO and I want it to go off with success! I've been paying some people who are better than I to produce ... [read more]
...what would you be? I was thinking today about what type of people become copywriters... and more specifically, what type of people make GOOD copywriters. Naturally, a creative mind seems ... [read more]
Please take a look at my Squeeze Page: Link Here I get a lot of traffic but very few optins. I am directing people to this page by solo email ... [read more]
''The difference between the almost right word & the right word is really a large matter--it's the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.'' - Letter to George Bainton, ... [read more]
Yep, I'm looking for a Christian copywriter. Must have already written successfully a long copy letter for the Christian market. I'm talking Christian fundamentalist market. My letter is already written ... [read more]
What are some ways you go about finding Facts and Statistics to use for proof elements?
I was wondering what people thought to having small "who am I" in a sales copy. Obviously prospects need to know who they are buying from (if they havn't bought ... [read more]
EADIM2011: The Presentations Check that out. I'm not an affiliate. It's not a ploy to get you to buy (although you should).
Do you need a business license, either for practical or positioning reasons (to look more legit) to offer copywriting? I live in NorCal, USA.