Critique for Crowdfunding Copy + best order of sections?
Hello everybody,
I have recently launched a crowdfunding project on Indiegogo and would appreciate any critique on the copy and especially the headlines (yes, i read the sticky post and used info there).
http://igg.me/at/InnovationDeck/x/
The potential customers are engineers and inventors, as well as engineering management.
i should probably mention that the order of the sections baffles me at the moment -- should I put detailed description of the product (cards: step1,2,3) higher up? Description of myself and my bio further down? (do people even care?)
I hate that IndieGoGo doesn´t allow split-testing the page.
Any feedback is appreciated.
I have recently launched a crowdfunding project on Indiegogo and would appreciate any critique on the copy and especially the headlines (yes, i read the sticky post and used info there).
http://igg.me/at/InnovationDeck/x/
The potential customers are engineers and inventors, as well as engineering management.
i should probably mention that the order of the sections baffles me at the moment -- should I put detailed description of the product (cards: step1,2,3) higher up? Description of myself and my bio further down? (do people even care?)
I hate that IndieGoGo doesn´t allow split-testing the page.
Any feedback is appreciated.
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RickDuris -
Thanks
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