Headline Critique...
Can I please get some feedback about this headline…
Version 1:
Uses a Unique ‘Covert Squeeze Page’ Technology, Which Blows Away Traditional ‘Squeeze Pages’.....and Boosts Your Optins By 147% to 267%...
What would you Say?
I’m not sure whether asking a question in that way is the right way to go..
Or whether it should be reworded like this..
How Would You Like Me To Hand You The Next Generation List Building System That Uses a Groundbreaking ‘Covert Squeeze Page’ Technology To Boost Your Optins By 147% to $267%?
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