I just analyzed a new headline and got this...
After hours of testing and rewriting my headlines the analyzer returned an EMV score of 90% on my final headline.
Here is the headline:
Woody's Targeted Business Letters"
The target for the sales letters are in the Legal fields.
Because I am anal about testing, real eyes give better feedback than a website's analyzer. So I'd like to hear from the group.
Slice it, dice it and squeeze the hell out of it. Spare no opinion. I want to hear your feedback, especially from the veterans who know how to cut open the jugular but leave no trace they were ever present.
UPDATE: Please note I'm not 100% sold on this headline. I found it ironic that in it's current wording it scored 90% for emotional marketing value. If I respond to your post please respond back.
I want your feedback but as Ewen as done, he has provided solid proof. Don't just say it's weak. Tell me why it's weak. I can't improve unless you are very specific.
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