Hit me with your rhythm stick - sales page critique - please
Hit me slowly, hit me quick. Ian Drury & The Blockheads.
Hi all you incredibly generous with your time and expertise copy people.
May I be so bold as to ask for a critique and, perhaps, a point in the right direction?
Thank you,
Jim Cook
The Internet Marketing Video Training Center - imvtCenter.com
P.S.
Why write "Killer Copy"? Wouldn't it be better to write living copy?
Why "Close a sale"? Wouldn't it be better to open a business relationship?
Hi all you incredibly generous with your time and expertise copy people.
May I be so bold as to ask for a critique and, perhaps, a point in the right direction?
Thank you,
Jim Cook
The Internet Marketing Video Training Center - imvtCenter.com
P.S.
Why write "Killer Copy"? Wouldn't it be better to write living copy?
Why "Close a sale"? Wouldn't it be better to open a business relationship?