Critique my Pages
Im openning a dating coaching company which is going to be mostly internet based.
For now i have 2 pages, about and coaching(which has 3 coaching options)
i would like a short critique on those pages:
About me | spartan DesireCoaching | spartan Desire
The About me:
The page give some information about me and my buisness and give a link to the coaching page.
The coaching page:
i have 3 options of coaching in my buisness. i though about making a page for the 3 options-like i have, and give "read more" links to a somewhat selling page for each of the pages.
Wouldnt it be over-sale?
I feel as if im not using enough emotions, enough problem solving in my pages.
I am going to add a few filmed testimonials to the Coaching page but would appreciate your thoughts and tips.
thanks,
tal.
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