Need a websites content critique

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Hello All,

So we have launched our site for testing.

SEMRocket

Is there anything wrong with the content that you notice or is there anything that you would change?

Thank you for your time!
#content #critique #websites
  • Profile picture of the author secretcopyman
    Nice wordpress template. Well designed.

    What I would change are your sentences under each "feature" in the
    Manage All Your Marketing In One Application

    part.


    I think your sentences are way too long, explaining each feature. Take the last sentence or two of each paragraph and let that describe the features.


    For example:

    OPTIMIZATION WIZARD: "With over 30 optimization factors, achieving a better ranking has never been easier."



    REAL TIME DASHBOARD: "Discover your high traffic and relevant keywords and optimize your site accordingly to see those ratings soar!"


    Let that be it.



    "Coming Soon" is just not a good look. Makes you look unprepared and not ready to launch. If it's not a feature they can use, no need to have it up there. (Just my opinion, maybe some will disagree)


    Also, I don't love your headline.



    INTERNET MARKETING HAS NEVER BEEN EASIER!


    And then I see a video with complicated graphs and charts and small letters and maps. Oh my God. That doesn't look easy to me.
    But I don't know your target audience.

    Not saying your program won't be highly effective, but maybe there needs to be some better language.



    Nice site though.



    P.S. No logo for SemRocket? Just black letters? That's no fun. :-(
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