BOY EATS HIS OWN HEAD!

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Headlines are there for one purpose: stop the reader in his tracks and turn his attention to your message that follows.

So many marketers say they can't come up with a good headline. Do you know why? Most copywriters over-think and over-complicate the task.

The next time you're passing by a newsstand (like those downtown on a busy street corner or in an airport) or you're in a bookstore (like B & N) or maybe even the grocery store check-out line, take a minute and purchase a copy of the National Equirer. You're probably not too interested in their "gossip" style of writing, but you should be interested in their copy headlines.

Study them and learn about marketing. Those people know how to sell their publication and it's often an impulse buy after the prospect scans those outrageous headlines.

Who wouldn't be stopped in their tracks and want to find out more when they saw the headline: "BOY EATS HIS OWN HEAD!"? (That one was from years ago and is still my all-time favorite!)

Here's a headline from the 1980's: "PLOT TO GRAB ELVIS $MILLIONS - Religious Cult Brainwashing His Daughter"

Here's one from a recent issue: "IS IT TRUE WHAT THEY'RE SAYING ABOUT TAYLOR SWIFT?! - The startling secret TAYLOR doesn't want YOU to know!"

You might even want to start a swipe file of your favorite headlines . . . the ones that forced you to read more of the accompanying article.

Don't try to tell me that such outlandish or sensational headlines have no place in your Internet marketing. I'm not advocating that you use them word for word. I'm suggesting, of course, that you adapt them to your own purposes.

Sometimes you've got to overcome the commonplace and boring - stand out - draw attention - be a little "over the top." Headlines are one of those times!

Yes, it's almost embarrassing purchasing the Enquirer but you'll thank me later.

Alternate opinions are welcomed.

Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author ChadHaynes
    My hand was in motion to click this post before my conscious mind realized that there's absolutely no way this post is about a boy eating his own head.

    And that right there is a valuable lesson. A lesson that you just gave me.

    Thanks for that.
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    • Profile picture of the author Slade556
      Originally Posted by ChadHaynes View Post

      My hand was in motion to click this post before my conscious mind realized that there's absolutely no way this post is about a boy eating his own head.
      Ah! So I'm not the only one!
      No, seriously, a good headline is crucial!

      However, I have to say, some news websites really exaggerate, they use what it called "link bait" and have headlines like this: "Wild POLICE CHASE stop woman from doing something HORRIBLE"... and then you click it and you read some BS article about nothing interesting! And then you're disappointed and then you unsubscribe from this online newspaper because it's just annoying.

      So, my point is, headlines are extremely important, but so is the content!
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  • Profile picture of the author Mantup
    Interestingly enough even the Wall Street Journal does this. It is never simply "Cable TV ratings fall as streaming becomes popular", instead "Streaming Services Hammer Cable-TV Ratings!"

    Even if it isn't an outlandish headline, using action verbs definitely help. Especially non-traditional verbs.
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  • Profile picture of the author dddougal
    i love outlandish headlines, they'r my specialty.
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  • Profile picture of the author italk
    Steve, you FORGOT the number one rule with headlines.

    Anyone reading Gary Halbert's letters will know this.

    Anyone following Gary Bencivenga will know this.

    Anyone remotely interesting in writing will know this.

    And, of course, copywriters know this as well.
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    • Profile picture of the author ajwalton99
      Originally Posted by italk View Post

      Steve, you FORGOT the number one rule with headlines.

      Anyone reading Gary Halbert's letters will know this.

      Anyone following Gary Bencivenga will know this.

      Anyone remotely interesting in writing will know this.

      And, of course, copywriters know this as well.
      Curiosity?

      Which is also what makes these headlines work...

      OMG what doesn't Taylor Swift want me to know!!! I must
      buy this magazine so I can read the article and find out!!!
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      • Profile picture of the author italk
        Originally Posted by ajwalton99 View Post

        Curiosity?

        Which is also what makes these headlines work...

        OMG what doesn't Taylor Swift want me to know!!! I must
        buy this magazine so I can read the article and find out!!!
        Curiosity, and something more important.

        It's how relationships and marriages work.

        It's how best friends are created.

        And it's, again, how people believe in you.

        Steve missed that point.

        ==> And that one element is what makes your readers believe
        in you and the product you are selling.

        This powerful element is TRUST.

        ==> You break the trust. You break the relationship.

        It's simple as that. Just think about it...

        Just the other day, I was watching Masterchef. In it, the
        judge was a chef and the participants were asked to
        make a special sweet dish.

        One lady made a beautiful Indian desert filled with almonds and
        raisins. Or at least that's what she said to the chef.

        As the chef tasted it, and saw her, she knew something was wrong.

        He said something incredibly important: it was about the
        promise she gave him before he tasted the desert.

        "Where are the almonds? And the raisins?" asked the chef.

        He was pissed. She was nervous.

        This is because her claims were bigger than her
        delivery. That Indian desert never had any of those
        almonds and raisins (call it "insignificant" amount).

        Headlines are like those deserts.

        You have to deliver what you promise.

        As the reader quickly glances through her emails, your outlandish
        headline will probably grab her attention. She will click on it.

        But if you don't deliver what you promise, your reader will be
        that chef - pissed and angry.

        She can even fire you.

        Remember: the trophy is in the hands of your readers, and she
        will give it to you when you build trust.
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        • Profile picture of the author TeKn1qu3z
          Originally Posted by italk View Post

          Curiosity, and something more important.

          It's how relationships and marriages work.

          It's how best friends are created.


          And it's, again, how people believe in you.

          Steve missed that point.

          .
          Steve Nice explanation and though they were large sites and i nthose days knowledge is poor compare to these days.
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        • Profile picture of the author Steve B
          Originally Posted by italk View Post

          As the reader quickly glances through her emails, your outlandish headline will probably grab her attention. She will click on it.

          italk,

          This, and only this, is what my post was about.

          Trust, and value, and making good on promises are certainly important and come as your narrative unfolds in your copy. Those attributes are sometimes carried in the headline . . . but most often they are not.

          That is a discussion for another thread and was not my intent.

          My post was about stopping the reader and getting his/her attention. That's it.

          If you don't do that, there will be no opportunity or need to develop trust. There will be no relationship.

          I have found in my career that trust is usually not granted freely, that trust is earned over time.


          Originally Posted by italk View Post

          But if you don't deliver what you promise, your reader will be that chef - pissed and angry.
          No arguments from me. But I wasn't talking about delivery just yet. That comes as the story unfolds.

          Steve
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  • Profile picture of the author angiecolee
    All well and good.

    Just make sure that if I picked up your magazine or opened your email to learn about the boy who ate his own head, that inside somewhere, I'm reading about the boy who ate his own head.

    Readers don't much like being duped for clever headlines.
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