Dog Training Sales Page Copy Review

I really like this page!

I only don t see a mail box. It could be usefull to increase your business!

You may want to consider starting with the content under "Are You Struggling With Any of These 30 Behavioral Issues With Your Own Dog?" and changing the subhead to a more what-you-will-get style.

Or at least change "If You Said Yes, Don't Worry, You Are Not Alone" to "If You Said Yes, Don't Worry, In (amount of time) (this really awesome result) Will Happen".

Then paint a pretty picture of life without the stress and worry and anger caused by their dog.

The beginning seems contradicting:

"It's not your fault..."
"Millions of dog owners make the same mistake..."
And here's the killer: "The reason why you do is because you are a human and he is a dog" (insulted the reader)

As I was writing this... I came to the realization... that I hope your target market doesn't love their dogs...

"Wild Animal"?

Not my dog. She's part of the family.

Yeah. I think there's a bit more work to be done... a lot of bits.

Thanks for the feedback so far guys!

This page is one of the most neat pages I have seen so far, I really think you should start blowing some traffic through it!