Rookie would really appreciate critique
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The seeds for NOC were first planted in the year (2014?) after my wife earned her Bachelors degree & decided to pursue her Masters in the field of medicine. But which university should she select? Which school would be the best school for her chosen studies? Sadly,we quickly discovered that there was nowhere to go for easy answers to these questions.
After spending hours on time consuming research & endless phone calls to the schools she was interested in,we then had to take that information & convert it into a worksheet for comparison. Even so,she had a difficult time determining answers to even the simplest of questions such as ;
What is the minimum GPA accepted ?
The minimum course requirements needed to apply?
What tests will be administered during the application process?
Whether the desired Practical Training programs are available?
After witnessing my wife's difficulties & frustration at this extremely stressful process, the idea of NOC was born. I became determined to create a place where Students across the world could easily locate this knowledge in a socially driven atmosphere of shared ideas & experiences.
A community of Students helping Students discover all the options that are available to them & ultimately aid their peers to spread their branches & extend their educational roots .These few very simple beliefs are the core values & concepts behind the dream of NOC
So we invite all Students from all over the globe to join in our dream & to grow with us!
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. Our Mission is to create a global community where current University & College students can connect & share their ideas,thoughts,& experiences about their schools with novice prospective scholars. We pledge this commitment to help all students achieve their educational dreams & desires by providing a multitude of informational resources in a single searchable database so they are empowered to form more knowledgeable decisions about their choices of academic facilities.We undertake this endeavor in the steadfast belief that all graduates of the world have the right to have uncomplicated access to the materials & support needed to realize their educational goals.
Vision -To unify All Students with All Schools in the common goal of helping one another spread their branches & extend their educational roots.
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What is a NOC & how will it help you find the right school?
Well simply put,NOC is a symbol, But more that that, NOC is an ideal, a visual icon of the future. Your future. When you graduate from high school,you proudly wear a hard earned black cap signifying the end of that chapter in your adventure. But your educational journey is not quite over yet because now you are ready & eager to continue on the path to a higher education. You have a new black cap to look forward to but this honor is not quite ready to be plucked thus your cap is still green waiting for the harvest.. Much like you are also not quite ready to graduate yet & need time to ripen a little more.
So how will NOC help you achieve this? How are we different from other School review sites? Well, most importantly,we have gathered together the information that we (as former university students ourselves) know you actually need & organized it. Then we devised a search engine that allows you to search these resources by several specific & unique criteria like;
Availability of CPT/OPT curriculum
Whether a GRE or TOEFL is required
What is the minimum GPA required?
We have also introduced an interactive & social environment. Because who better to give you the uncensored details on a college or university than the actual students of that school themselves? So we asked & they answered! And since they did, we are able to bring you;
Detailed reviews of the application process from current & former Students
Detailed reviews of the School's overall performance
Intergrated social media features such as Twiiter, FB, & Google+ to help you get & stay even more connected
An relaxed informal atmosphere where Opinions & Knowledge can be freely shared
So what are you still waiting for? Start searching now & find the best School for your next chapter! Or if you are already attending a School come share your experiences & help a fellow Student extend their educational roots.
And to All a warm welcome to the NOC community!
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K that's it I know it's a bit much but if anyone would be kind enough to give me some feedback, it would really help. Thank you so much for your time Regards, Lily
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