My first-ever 2 copys. Critique needed. Doesn't catch attention.
Can't seem to spark interest of people with this kind of copy, what do you think? Give me the real deal.
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Hi. I'm Ken from WeSnapshot - Instagram Marketing Agency in Estonia.
Pay attention. I know... Your time is valuable, but it'll be worth it...
I bet you haven't heard of us. That's right, it's because of our location. Where is Estonia? Well it's not the point of this story. Let's move on.
I believe we have something you want. Something that helps you achieve your goals as a marketer.
Information is the key they say. Knowledge is power.
You know that the usual free content just doesn't cut it if you want to be the best. Something is left unsaid. Golden nuggets are held secret.
We are conducting a mass-scale survey to determine the pain points of Instagram marketers. Tell us your biggest challenges and you will RECEIVE A GIFT worth your time.
Get familiar with our story (SPOILER: It's like a series of Rocky, you can see, feel and hear the pain we went through) and why we are doing this: Wesnapshot.com - Free Instagram Marketing Ebook
Thank you all for your input!
PS! Our process includes a method to uncover the big pain points that people are the most interested in solving, and that's what we want to build our e-course around.
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And on the homepage:
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We are a team of artistic photographers, elegant copywriters, marketing magicians, and philanthropists who transform creative ideas into living, breathing and working solutions.
BUT... It wasn't always like this...
For years we were treated as garbage. We were the first marketing agency in the world to specialize on Instagram. Nobody wanted our service, even though we knew that we could help businesses increase their sales and build healthier relationships with their customers. But... we were ahead of the market. We were the so-called trendsetters. You don't want to be one. It's tough. Trust us. Local businesses didn't even know what Instagram was! It would be a lie if we told you that we didn't have the thoughts of shutting our company down for good...
...fortunately, we were dumb or smart enough to push through.
Fast-forward a few years and we have arrived at the doorstep of Instagram marketing age. As our client base started to grow, we constantly tweaked and improved our workflow. Now, we are the most in-demand Instagram marketing agency in the Baltic States. With constant iterative optimization, we have built an Instagram marketing system to fit the needs of any business in any niche.
We want to share our knowledge with you and create an e-course that will give you the hands-on access to our powerful system.
For that, we need your help! Please fill in our 3-minute survey, so we can make sure that we have covered the main pain points of our soon-to-be students.
...the trick is to know your students so you can teach them more efficiently.
Help us help you.
WeSnapshot Team
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Thanks in advance !
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