Please critique my sales letter
While I have written sales letters for other niches before, I've never written one to sell a copywriting product, so my A-game should be switched on for this before I send it, hence my asking for a critique.
It's a direct mail letter to people who have adverts out in local newspapers. I have a (legit) charity twist so as to bring refunds down.
Thank you for your advice.
I've pasted it here
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