Rip It To Shredds (Moved Post from Main...)
I originally posted this in the main forum, and it was kindly suggested that it belongs over here, so I moved it.
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I recently created a product, inspired by the "Desperate Buyers Only" approach to product creation. I would really appreciate it if you can pick it apart and tell me straight what works and what is not working about it. You can find it at: stopdebtcollectors**dot**org
A couple of notes right off the bat:
1) It's ugly, yes, I know. It lacks a proper header and images in general are quite sparse. Working on that...it's got a Belcher Button to it's credit though...
2) It's long - the sales letter I mean. The product is quite short (let's call it "concise") and the main bonus being offered is an ebook that is larger than the main report.
3)It lacks testimonials. Namely, because...I don't have any yet!! In fact, if you have ideas for best ways to generate them, please let me know.
4) Right now, it's being sold through e-junkie and I have not messed with the affiliate option there just yet. I would like to launch it at either paydotcom or clickbank, but frankly, do not want to pay the $49 at CB until I know it is converting, and I am wondering if paydotcom might actually be a better way to go (large well known network and it's free to be a vender, if I am not mistaken...)
In fact, if anyone is in the CC or related niche and wants to promote, feel free to PM (NOT soliciting and I don't know if there is a rule around here regarding making a comment like that - I just mention it in case there is any interest...)
Thanks very much in advance for your feedback on this!
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Direct Response Copywriting
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Always looking for badass direct-response copywriters. PM me if we don't know each other and you're looking for work.
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Whatever you need, my high converting copy puts more money in your pocket. PM for details. 10 years experience and 9 figure revenues.
"What doesn't kill me makes me stronger."-- Friedrich Nietzsche...
Whatever you need, my high converting copy puts more money in your pocket. PM for details. 10 years experience and 9 figure revenues.