Does this headline make sense in english?
It's 3 am in good old Germany... and a new year has just started.
I have been working all night long writing email swipes, however I'm currently not at the top of my english game so please help me out.
Here is a first draft for a headline:
"Instantly Discover How To Flip The Hidden Switch To Losing 10 Pounds In 10 Days!"
Does it make sense?Is the English correct form a native speakers point of view?
Improvement ideas (can't go into detail when and where it will be used at this point in time)?
Help is much appreciated since the native speaking team members are currently sitting on this rock called England and therefore not available.
Happy new year
Max
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Lightin' fuses is for blowin' stuff togethah.